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two chord song challenge entry
on: January 07, 2021, 14:05:32
This is my entry for the challenge.  I'm not sure if there was much interest in this challenge, but I wrote a song.

https://soundcloud.com/user-522876838/denial

Lyrics

If darkness is a metaphor, what do I use it for,
When I standing in the light of day?
If I was to ease your mind, I would do it every time,
Your thoughts just run away.

The Devil waits at St. Peterís Gate,
For souls who realize too late,
They made a deal that sealed their fates.

The dogs of war wait at the door for their masterís arrival,
The hounds of hell pick up the smell of some old saintís revival
Love lies on the floor, broken and feeling poor,
Doubting her survival
I canít comfort you or tell what to do,
When youíre in denial,

The Devil waits at St. Peterís Gate,
For souls who realize too late,
They made a deal that sealed their fates.

I canít comfort you or tell what to do,
When youíre in denial,
Vince


Re: two chord song challenge entry
Reply #1 on: January 07, 2021, 20:57:04
I love this. I have missed hearing your voice @Vince ........so gentle and powerful and emotive all at the same time.

Listening again....fantastic lyrics.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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https://soundcloud.com/vincentgleason


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Re: two chord song challenge entry
Reply #2 on: January 08, 2021, 07:27:11
A great entry @Vince

Almost abstract electric guitar. Reminds me a bit of Duncan Brownís 1st LP (give me take you - Immidiate). Shyness can be a strong point in arts. And it is here. Very strong.
I like it a lot.
Good luck with the challenge.
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: two chord song challenge entry
Reply #3 on: January 08, 2021, 09:02:38
@Vince!!

gorgeous!

You caught me with that!! ::thumb:: ::thumb::


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Re: two chord song challenge entry
Reply #4 on: January 08, 2021, 15:33:10
Thank you so much @Leonard Scaper  @LePlongeur and @Mo   This is one of those songs (I'm sure we all have one or two) that I just wasn't sure of.

I also need to thank @Bill from November Sound  and @robertkc for their advise and encouragement on the first draft.

Vince



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