• Give me proof
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Give me proof
on: April 18, 2020, 09:03:43
« Last Edit: April 21, 2020, 09:37:41 by Nelly 20 »
Hi,

I'm a lyricist, I don't play any instruments.. I'm looking for a composer/producer to collaborate with me on this pop song the style of Ariana Grande or Britney Spears.

Need a composer/producer to put the music then  produce a master. I hope to submit it to a record label.
This is my Email : nellylyrics777@gmail.com

 
 Title: Give Me Proof    © 2019 . All Rights Reserved

 Verse 1:

When I fell in your love I thought,
Heaven has sent me / a great pri-iize
I was flying with / the butterfli-iies 
But what happened really / was a surpri-iise
My worries have begun, /  you aren't the one
As if Heaven / took back its prize. 


Pre-Chorus :

 Ain't I your love?
Ain't you my love?
So,

Chorus :

 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 

 
Verse 2:

In the beginning, you promised that; 
Whatever happened you / would love me-ee
You said, “Love makes us / strong and happy-yy ”
But it ain't the way / we used to be-ee
When I'm with you, / I feel weak and blue  /
Like a caged bird / hoping to be free

 
Pre-Chorus :

 Ain't I your love?
Ain't you my love?
So,

 
Chorus :

 
 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 

 
Bridge:
 
Your secrets always always/
 ( appear in your eyes.)
I can feel your real words/
 ( and your bad lies.)


Chorus :


 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 


Re: Give me proof
Reply #1 on: April 18, 2020, 23:03:28
Hi @Nelly 20  … great to see you getting involved here in the kitchen!  :)
Do you have a melody in mind?
Is there a way you could sing kind of what you want in a private soundcloud link or unlisted youtube vid?
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Give me proof
Reply #2 on: April 21, 2020, 09:49:29
Hi Bill,

Thanks for your reply.. I'm just a lyricist ,  I don't sing but I think It can be a hit up-tempo song and it seems like Britney Spears - womanizer - of course not exactly..

Maybe an up-tempo electropop and dance-pop song.
I'm not sure but  It's the picture in my mind and I like to know your opinion, please.

If anyone wants to give it a go please, listen to Britney's "Womanizer" and " Circus" ,
 to know the way I like the singer to sing it and the way I like my song to be like, then try to do something like that.

Regards,
Nelly




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