• Give me proof
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Give me proof
on: April 18, 2020, 09:03:43
« Last Edit: April 21, 2020, 09:37:41 by Nelly 20 »
Hi,

I'm a lyricist, I don't play any instruments.. I'm looking for a composer/producer to collaborate with me on this pop song the style of Ariana Grande or Britney Spears.

Need a composer/producer to put the music then  produce a master. I hope to submit it to a record label.
This is my Email : nellylyrics777@gmail.com

 
 Title: Give Me Proof    © 2019 . All Rights Reserved

 Verse 1:

When I fell in your love I thought,
Heaven has sent me / a great pri-iize
I was flying with / the butterfli-iies 
But what happened really / was a surpri-iise
My worries have begun, /  you aren't the one
As if Heaven / took back its prize. 


Pre-Chorus :

 Ain't I your love?
Ain't you my love?
So,

Chorus :

 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 

 
Verse 2:

In the beginning, you promised that; 
Whatever happened you / would love me-ee
You said, “Love makes us / strong and happy-yy ”
But it ain't the way / we used to be-ee
When I'm with you, / I feel weak and blue  /
Like a caged bird / hoping to be free

 
Pre-Chorus :

 Ain't I your love?
Ain't you my love?
So,

 
Chorus :

 
 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 

 
Bridge:
 
Your secrets always always/
 ( appear in your eyes.)
I can feel your real words/
 ( and your bad lies.)


Chorus :


 Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure of     
Your crazy love for meee
 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if ( make me ) 
Give me proo-oof! ( give me )
Make me sure if
You really still love meee! 


Re: Give me proof
Reply #1 on: April 18, 2020, 23:03:28
Hi @Nelly 20  … great to see you getting involved here in the kitchen!  :)
Do you have a melody in mind?
Is there a way you could sing kind of what you want in a private soundcloud link or unlisted youtube vid?
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

Not currently posting music here but we're easy to find if you care to listen. November Sound will happily listen, follow, like, subscribe and repost for people who do the same. We get a lot of spam so let us know you're from the kitchen!


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Re: Give me proof
Reply #2 on: April 21, 2020, 09:49:29
Hi Bill,

Thanks for your reply.. I'm just a lyricist ,  I don't sing but I think It can be a hit up-tempo song and it seems like Britney Spears - womanizer - of course not exactly..

Maybe an up-tempo electropop and dance-pop song.
I'm not sure but  It's the picture in my mind and I like to know your opinion, please.

If anyone wants to give it a go please, listen to Britney's "Womanizer" and " Circus" ,
 to know the way I like the singer to sing it and the way I like my song to be like, then try to do something like that.

Regards,
Nelly




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