• You and I [needs to be re-written, or some parts]
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Re: You and I [needs to be re-written, or some parts]
Reply #15 on: February 20, 2018, 17:49:19
Ya know @Lane .... I was messing around with this song at the piano last night.
Maybe it could be a non-countryish song?
Are you offering it up that others can try to work with it? Maybe I could show it to the rest of November Sound and see if they wanna try a stab at it?
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: You and I [needs to be re-written, or some parts]
Reply #16 on: February 20, 2018, 19:28:23
thank you @Bluedusksun, you know?  I think I`ve tried everything with this, I have a diff track a little more modern and a diff singer.  to tell you the truth, I don`t think it helped, but thats my opinion..someone else might see it diff.. the next thing was going to be a "Female singer, and a little re-arranging..never got there, I put it up.

the kid singing and playing this is out of Nashville, I had him do this years ago..
The song is about 10-11 yrs old "man but there are others  that have songs like this [they don`t throw out] way older.
if someone can get  anything out of it, i`m for that...its theirs. I see Bill is messing with it, I`l just going to let him have a go with it..

thanks Rich  for all the advise and the input in this its always welcome.    Lane


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Re: You and I [needs to be re-written, or some parts]
Reply #17 on: February 20, 2018, 19:36:04
« Last Edit: February 20, 2018, 19:39:25 by Lane »
Hey @Bill from November Sound, heck yes  Bill you want it, or a stab at it go man go...lol and  if you want  I can send you the orig write, and the up-dated music..I think I can put them on here as   "attachment  re-write it, do what ever you want..just one thing you got to let  me hear it..all I ask. let me know if there is anything you want.  thanks Bill...   Lane


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Re: You and I [needs to be re-written, or some parts]
Reply #18 on: February 21, 2018, 15:22:44
Ya know @Lane .... I was messing around with this song at the piano last night.
Maybe it could be a non-countryish song?
Are you offering it up that others can try to work with it? Maybe I could show it to the rest of November Sound and see if they wanna try a stab at it?

Hey @Bill from November Sound, heck yes  Bill you want it, or a stab at it go man go...lol

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