over the garden wall

I look terrible here, again
but i think the performance is quite smooth
I've become incredibly slow with finishing new material
So this is an old favourite of mine

Feedback would be welcome
I'm always at least hoping to progress
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link:

over the garden wall


deconstruction of smaller parts
we're breaking it down once more
with shorter skirts and faster cars
we're filing for divorce
out through the window
to fly or to fall
will we land on our feet
over the garden wall

moral compass is all askew
it's hard to tell wrong from right
pushing forward we get confused
now don't you cheat on my wife
shake off your slumber
abandon the dream
willfully wander to
a place I've never been

the time has come to do or die,
to give the devil his due
your eyes have died two thousand times
as each one has lived a thousand lives
as each one, each one
each one has lived a thousand lives

I'm not complaining
it's par for the course that's all
there is plenty to see
over the garden wall

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Rightly

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Hi @rightly
That link doesn't work. It is trying to send us to YT studio - over at the right at the three dots - grab "shareable link"

Hi @rightly
That link doesn't work. It is trying to send us to YT studio - over at the right at the three dots - grab "shareable link"

I'm sorry

Modified now 

@rightly  - looks good - rocknroll - fine song too. A keeper

If you (I, everybody actually) manage to write songs that you like or that you are fond of, we can put development, bigger, and better on the back burner.

I like this one quite a lot, the lyrics especially. @rightly
Kind regards, Gus

The performance was better than smooth!  The best compliment I can give is that Berlin were a little closer to Bristol I would happily spend a bit of cash to see you play live.  I am slight weird in the way that I much prefer most songs delivered in the raw and stripped back way and this is a great example. 

Raw and stripped back indeed @rightly and well said @DavidHutton  from the beginning I could imagine some cool percussion with brushes and a soft Jazz Upright Bass and that performance would be Epic 

The lyrics are from the heart and well crafted...

Good stuff