• The mirror
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The mirror
on: September 13, 2019, 19:24:45
2 versions of one song, recorded in the rehersal studio in 2017. Haven't listened on them for a while and found them in my phone.





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Re: The mirror
Reply #1 on: September 13, 2019, 20:06:29
I like the first version much more than the second. In fact, after listening to the second I went back and listened again to the first.

The pace of that version is better as it allows you more space to invest a ton of emotion into your vocal delivery.....which you definitely do. I also think that is a better key for you to be singing in. Even if you were to take the song into a more expansive production, I think this slower pace would be good.

I'd like to hear that, in fact. I like your style a lot. Do you have any other material to share?
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Re: The mirror
Reply #2 on: September 14, 2019, 12:55:01
« Last Edit: September 14, 2019, 12:58:14 by Fiddlasrogers »
Hi @Leonard Scaper.
Thanks for the input and that you like the style I'm playing.
The key is actually the same in both versions as far as I can remember, I just take the vocals into a higher pitch in the second version.

I do have more material and recordings to share, just have to do a search in my computer to see what's ok, and I'm in the process of recording a full leanght album. I'm also thinking about doing a full live recording of a full set of songs with better sound, light and camera angles. So that might come in the near future.

Anyhow thanks alot.


Re: The mirror
Reply #3 on: September 18, 2019, 22:17:24
Hi @Fiddlasrogers  .... It's good to hear and see you live. It's cool how both are so different. I think I like the more modern approach in that second one but maybe you should lower the key a bit so as not to strain.
They're both good, though. I look forward to hearing the future incarnations of this and other creations of yours. :) 
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: The mirror
Reply #4 on: September 21, 2019, 20:45:40
I think that the first version works better than the second because the slower pace works better with the emotion the song is trying to convey. I really like your guitar playing on both songs, though. I enjoyed listening to both versions. I look forward to seeing what you do in the future.


Re: The mirror
Reply #5 on: September 22, 2019, 11:54:54
Thank you all for the feedback.



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