• Angels Twenty-One - in progress, looking for ideas
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Angels Twenty-One - in progress, looking for ideas
on: December 11, 2017, 14:04:57
This one isn't finished. It's going to be a bright, major rock song. I'd love some ideas about how to finish it. I'll let you guess what it's about.

Falling from angels twenty-one,
There's a floodlight humming
A fissure of a gun

Guardian devil's a shining sun
And his masked grey bandit's
Stealing peace of mind for fun

But all the while there's blinking LEDs
Telling you but not telling me
About the Basecamp half way up
Everest's desert mountain top.

Oh, I don't ever want to be there, captain
'Cause at the end of the rainbow there's a pot of mint,
At the peak of the pike there's a round-earth view
But no refreshments in the interlude.

I've got no parachute.

[chorus]
Show me how to pull the cord
Or place a trampoline to break my fall.
Catch me in the Millennium Falcon just
Don't shoot me down, Red Baroness.

I wanna crash down in No Man's Land,
No escape from your Red Right Hand
No sabre charge, no mouse, no cat
I wanna meet you in close combat.

Show me how to pull the cord
Look close enough and you'll see the word
On my banner trailing behind me


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Re: Angels Twenty-One - in progress, looking for ideas
Reply #1 on: December 11, 2017, 14:41:32
Interesting lyrics... but I don't quite understand the meaning of the song. Can you please enlighten me about it?



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