• Blame Game - Lauder (lyrics)
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Blame Game - Lauder (lyrics)
on: March 19, 2018, 12:53:47
Hey guys,

Got some lyrics which would love your thoughts on. I'm thinking of adding another verse. I am going to be recording a demo soon and will be uploading here!

The song is very solemn, like most of my stuff, with a loose acoustic guitar tuned down one step. The chords (structure not taking the tuning into account) are:
Verse: C, Em, F.
Chorus: Am, F, C, G.

Verse 1
Since you left me I'm not proud of what I've done
Girls have been there for me I haven't be there for them
You'd be ashamed by my late night escapades
You might say that I've changed. I'll never be the same.

Chorus
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame

Verse 2
When you met me I was just coming out of my shell
You know it hurt me seeing you doing so well

Chorus
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame
All I can say, is that you're the one to blame

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Re: Blame Game - Lauder (lyrics)
Reply #1 on: March 19, 2018, 12:56:58
Hey @lauder .....good start here. My first thought is that Verse 2 would make a great bridge and you should think about two other verses.
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Re: Blame Game - Lauder (lyrics)
Reply #2 on: April 02, 2018, 23:45:19
Link for song here: https://soundcloud.com/lauder_music/blame-game/s-9qr4n

Let me know your thoughts!


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Re: Blame Game - Lauder (lyrics)
Reply #3 on: April 05, 2018, 21:41:50
« Last Edit: April 05, 2018, 21:44:24 by Sal »
To me, there's a big difference between reading the lyrics and to hear you sing them. The beautiful voice en chorus brings them to life, I think. I like it this way.  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::



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