• Co-writers lyrics for this chorus 'Trouble'
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Co-writers lyrics for this chorus 'Trouble'
on: October 14, 2014, 01:13:33
Hi forum. 

Have a chorus but no verse. Welcome collabs. I've posted in lyrics section as lyrics needed for verses and bridge (melody line a plus)

https://soundcloud.com/calmlondon/trouble-chorus-demo


Song originally started from the perspective of the self. The bad side of the personality basically screwing up life for the side that just wants to be happy, hence the 'we're heading for all kinds of trouble'. 

The other perspective of course could be a relationship between two people, and it's on the brink. The warning signs are there. I would almost have it looking back after the event, if you could turn the clock back and intercept before it turned the wrong corner.

You and me are heading for all kinds of trouble,
I don't want to cause you all kinds of trouble.
We have one life, if we don't live it right,
If we can't find a way to make this work my darling.
Then you and me are heading for all kinds of trouble.


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Re: Co-writers lyrics for this chorus 'Trouble'
Reply #1 on: October 14, 2014, 07:29:31
Can?t help you so far with a verse but you use the word trouble 3 times in the chorus.May it?s better you try to replace the second one by another word.
Good melody you have to keep on working.Seems like this song can get very good. Again. ;)
Alexander



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