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He Tells Me Every Day
on: June 26, 2020, 17:58:52
« Last Edit: June 28, 2020, 18:13:02 by Redlady »
Hi All,  Still writing between working 12 hour days--here is my latest one.

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=14071741

He Tells Me Every Day
© Schantell Wharton, Michelle Canning

V1
I may not be a size two
I ain’t the bikini type
All this house work that I never get through
But it don’t matter in his mind
‘Cause I am the one his heart goes to
He’s a perfect, gentle guy
He hears every word I say
And he tells me every day

Ch
He see the beauty of my spirit
He hears the laughter in my heart
He feel the warmth of my embrace
We’ve been like this from start
He smells the fragrance of my skin
And he gives me all his lovin’
What we’re feeling will never go away
And he tells me every day

V2
We’ve never stopped dating
We’re always having fun
He thinks I’m amazing
And he knows everything I’ve done
My need for him keeps growing
Because he’s my only one
I know he’ll never go away
Because he tell me every day

Ch
He see the beauty of my spirit
He hears the laughter in my heart
He feel the warmth of my embrace
We’ve been like this from start
He smells the fragrance of my skin
And he gives me all his lovin’
What we’re feeling will never go away-2x
And he tells me every day-2x


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Re: He Tells Me Every Day
Reply #1 on: June 27, 2020, 09:13:38
a complete other side of your writing @Redlady
Is it because this is a collaboration or wasn't I paying attention the last time?
Tonight I'm going to read this again.
I guess it takes some getting used to from the strong willed power woman to the right along side the edge of the abyss where sweetness is concerned. I really envy your force pushing ahead! I think it's a great piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus


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Re: He Tells Me Every Day
Reply #2 on: June 28, 2020, 18:14:57
Hi

I wrote the song and Michelle did the music.  I write all kinds of lyrics.  thanks for commenting.

Happy writing
Schantell- Redlady


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Reply #3 on: June 29, 2020, 08:59:59
Ahhhh..., that sounds really nice!
I hope you (or maybe the two of you) made a recording of it and that you are willing to share it.
I'm very curious !!!
Thank you! @Redlady
Kind regards, Gus


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Reply #4 on: June 29, 2020, 09:29:44
Hi

This was just the work tape.  When we get the final demo.  I will share .  Thank you for being encouraging and positive and helping move the song forward.

Happy Writing
Schantell


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Reply #5 on: June 29, 2020, 10:13:52
How completely stupid of me. The lyrics being posted in lyrics (if you're still with me) made me read the lyrics without expecting the sound to go with it.
You say working tape, but I've heard worse demos at the time.

Please @Redlady  and Michelle, go on in your own sweet tempo.
I don't like country as a rule but for you I would be glad to make an exception.
Go go go lady, and next time I will look closer. Promise!
Kind regards, Gus



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