• I Look See Horizon
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I Look See Horizon
on: January 11, 2021, 11:48:11
« Last Edit: January 12, 2021, 12:05:36 by rightly »
Hi there!

I'm always quick to indulge in the pleasure of sharing when I've done something new
maybe too quick, because this is still under construction
it's about 90 % there, with music n' everything

ah well, Feedback is sometimes useful.


I look see horizon



in the year of death
did I not live alone?
there I found your sweetness
now I want you to know
I look see horizon
as near as it can be
I just close my eyes and
it’s like you’re here with me

I look see horizon

when this war is over
before the next begins
if i get to hold you
it matters less who wins

I look see horizon

well, that would be my luck
to give a fuck then fall
for one who leaves me wanting
when I would have it all
‘goes around, comes around
y' know that's what they say
furthermore if not now
I will get mine someday

I look see horizon

when this war is over
before the next begins
will I get to hold you
it matters not who wins

I look see horizon
I look see horizon

when this war is over
will I get to hold you?

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Re: I Look See Horizon
Reply #1 on: January 12, 2021, 23:01:00
@rightly  Strong lyric - intruiging the double use of Look & See. Did you ment Look See to be like 1 verb? Or should the listener think a comma inbetween? I look, See Horizon.
Am  interested how you proceed with music for this.
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Re: I Look See Horizon
Reply #2 on: January 13, 2021, 10:05:32
@rightly  Strong lyric - intruiging the double use of Look & See. Did you ment Look See to be like 1 verb? Or should the listener think a comma inbetween? I look, See Horizon.
Am  interested how you proceed with music for this.

the delivery of that line is always straight forward
haven't made my mind up yet
but the straight forward is an intriguing quirk, it might stay
so no not necessarily a comma

It's pretty much done on guitar

haven't produced it yet.



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