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Mutual Runaway
on: May 06, 2020, 05:41:55
[V1]
When I settle down,
& I see the people in the streets,
There's no one around,
But I hear them talking bout' me.
My hands are cold,
& my fingers are broken,
I feel so exposed,
With no ones' body to hold

So if you'd be so kind,
I'd like those memories back,
Don't just go.

[CHORUS]
Let's fly away, Be my mutual runaway,
When gravity stops holding us down in the grey.
That's if we even meet again,
Take breath from the same old lips,
Share one last kiss,
I'll be something changed,
Shifted across into someone sane.

[V2]
Life alone's not nothing,
Just as simply put, time don't feel as unique ARGHHH!!!
For no one but you ooooo,
I'd trade the life of an angel,
Slit his throat and skin his eyes,
All in the name of love.

[CHORUS]

[V3]
All the answers in a morgue,
Keep dreaming in eyes left unopened,
Shutdown & still besotted,
Shutdown, No kickstart.

[CHORUS]

[FADE OUT]

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YO YO YO SPAGHETTIOS!!! Do let me know if these are too out there, I'e been working though a lot of personal issues recently and putting things like this out there for likeminded people to talk about really means the world to me right now. It's comforting to be a part of this  :)

As always, all opinions/commnts are welcome as long as I get summa dat sweet sweet karma ya get me?  O0

Peace, Love & More Love,
Cheers,
Lewis.


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Re: Mutual Runaway
Reply #1 on: May 06, 2020, 20:29:00
« Last Edit: May 06, 2020, 20:32:38 by Dutchbeat »
hi @LewisMac , these are fabulous lyrics in my opinion  :yes:

very, very good  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

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Re: Mutual Runaway
Reply #2 on: May 07, 2020, 00:31:35
Cool @LewisMac !

Is ARRRGH!!! really a part of the lyrics?  ;)    It's like they always said in Garfield comics. I love Garfield.  . sorry I shouldn't make light of these somber lyrics.
I just really like word "AAAAARGH!!!!"  :yes:  Is it even a word? Who knows. I just can't get past it.
Is it going to be sung, spoken, hollered, bellowed, screamed? The possibilities are endless.
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


Re: Mutual Runaway
Reply #3 on: June 18, 2020, 09:15:59
[V1]
When I settle down,
& I see the people in the streets,
There's no one around,
But I hear them talking bout' me.
My hands are cold,
& my fingers are broken,
I feel so exposed,
With no ones' body to hold

So if you'd be so kind,
I'd like those memories back,
Don't just go.

[CHORUS]
Let's fly away, Be my mutual runaway,
When gravity stops holding us down in the grey.
That's if we even meet again,
Take breath from the same old lips,
Share one last kiss,
I'll be something changed,
Shifted across into someone sane.

[V2]
Life alone's not nothing,
Just as simply put, time don't feel as unique ARGHHH!!!
For no one but you ooooo,
I'd trade the life of an angel,
Slit his throat and skin his eyes,
All in the name of love.

[CHORUS]

[V3]
All the answers in a morgue,
Keep dreaming in eyes left unopened,
Shutdown & still besotted,
Shutdown, No kickstart.

[CHORUS]

[FADE OUT]

------------------------------------------------------


YO YO YO SPAGHETTIOS!!! Do let me know if these are too out there, I'e been working though a lot of personal issues recently and putting things like this out there for likeminded people to talk about really means the world to me right now. It's comforting to be a part of this  :)

As always, all opinions/commnts are welcome as long as I get summa dat sweet sweet karma ya get me?  O0

Peace, Love & More Love,
Cheers,
Lewis.

I changed some words.

[V1]
When I've settled down,
& I see the people in the streets,
There's no one around,
But I hear them talking bout' me.
My hands are cold,
& my fingers feel broken,
And i'm so exposed,
With no ones' body to hold

So if you'd be so kind,
I'd like those memories back,
Don't just go.

[CHORUS]
Let's fly away, in a mutual runaway,
When gravity stops holding us down in the grey.
And if we even meet again,
Take breath from the same old lips,
Share one last kiss,
I'll be something changed,
Shifted across into someone sane.

[V2]
Life alone is not nothing,
And  simply put, time won't feel as unique ARGHHH!!!
For no one but you ooooo,
I'd trade the life of an angel,
Slit his throat and take his eyes,
In the name of painful  love.

[CHORUS]

[V3]
All answers lie in a morgue,
Dreaming with eyes left unopened,
Shutdown & still besotted,
Shutdown,

[CHORUS]

[FADE OUT]

I made some changes so that  the lyrics lend themselves better to singing and I removed some words that I didn't think were needed.

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