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My Girl
on: December 08, 2013, 17:44:07
57  My Girl         Dezember 2013
1) She is that kind of girl
which don?t look sweet
she is that kind of girl
which has dirty feet
her haircut looks more like for a man
and she has muscles more than Barbie?s Ken

Chorus: But however I have to say
she is my baby for me she looks sweet
she is a book I?d like to read
I don?t mind which rags she wear
she is my best friend everywhere

2) She is that kind of girl
which smoke cigarettes
she is that kind of girl
which has no regrets
her voice is deep and masculine
not much on her is feminine

Chorus: But however I have ......

3) She is that kind of girl
which drink more beer than wine
and with her tattoos
she feels fine
her shoes looks mor like a boat
when she drive her Indian on the road

Chorus: But however I have ......

4) She trained hours
in her fathers gym
and her name is not Maryline
I never saw another girl like you
but I?m always sure your love is true
I?m always sure your love is true
I?m always sure your love is true

? Words & Music by Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ?


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Re: My Girl
Reply #1 on: December 09, 2013, 15:23:42
Hi Fisch,

lyrics flow well, and looks like they are made for a rock and roll type of song
to judge whether this works, the music is the key, how you make this turning part, the nice part ("But however I have to say
she is my baby for me she looks sweet, she is a book I?d like to read, I don?t mind which rags she wear, she is my best friend everywhere") sound...that should be convincing because the other lines (the verses) make her look somewhat bad without that, i think

do you have a melody for thios already?
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Re: My Girl
Reply #2 on: December 09, 2013, 17:00:00
« Last Edit: December 09, 2013, 17:01:39 by fischermans »

do you have a melody for thios already?
Yes I have:La La La La La La  :D :D just kidding.
But realy have a melody and trust me, will be a good song. ;D ;D ;D


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Re: My Girl
Reply #3 on: December 10, 2013, 17:20:34


 hey fish,

 this looks like a good lyric to me
 I can't wait to hear the music to it
 it flows well and there are some cool lines in there

 good write
 
                         tony


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Re: My Girl
Reply #4 on: January 12, 2014, 23:03:22
Thank you Tony means a lot.You are the lyric Guru. ;)



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