• The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
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The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
on: January 04, 2017, 23:11:00
Hi!
I need some help with these lyrics. I'm italian, I can speak english but sometimes i make stupid mistakes and in a song they could make everything without sense 😁
Also, I haven't thought about the music for these so if you like them you can use them accompanying them with your own arrangement 😁



(Come here, please come to me,
Let me set you free.
Come here, please come to me,
I'll show you how to live)

Here alone in the dark
While the rain falls hard
You're walking down this empty street
Rain is mixed with your tears

(Come here, please come to me,
Let me set you free.
Come here, please come to me, I'll show you how to live)

That day I thought it was for me
The best one of the year
I didn't know you were so sad,
I've been so selfish and so bad!

Chorus:

Why,
You haven't told to anyone
That there was the pain in your heart
And why,
You haven't came near to me,
And you haven't whispered "help me" to my hear.

I should've told you "Stop!
Don't hurt yourself anymore!"
But you were not with me,
You preferred to end
Everything

(Come here, please come to me,
Let me set you free,
Come here, please come to me
I'll show you to live)

Why

You haven't told to anyone,
That there was the pain in your heart.
And why,
You haven't came near to me,
And you haven't whispered "save me" to my hear.


Re: The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
Reply #1 on: February 12, 2017, 22:48:57
Wow, these lyrics are so amazing, and powerful, too! Keep up the great work! ::headphone::
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Re: The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
Reply #2 on: February 26, 2017, 23:50:07
Hey clanik

I enjoyed reading through your lyrics. They are well thought out, atmospheric, moving if not a little sad.

I'm a little confused by this line; "And you haven't whispered "help me" to my hear."
Did you mean, to my EAR??
Or,
For me too hear?


Re: The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
Reply #3 on: October 21, 2017, 04:12:10
Hello!

Do you still need help with the lyrics?


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Re: The Sad Story Of A Never Existed Boy
Reply #4 on: October 21, 2017, 11:10:29
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