• Too Much Pain
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Too Much Pain
on: September 26, 2021, 19:13:24
Looking for a third ďwind-upĒ verse for this Reggae ditty ::Suzy::

Iíve been playing it repeating the first verse at the end... maybe that works? Or maybe I need a new 1st verse?

Not sure why Iím stuck in this loop...

All thoughts and suggestions welcome and appreciated  ::Suzy::


Too Much Pain

Reach out your hand... to your Brother
Understand... One another
We were given these words to remember
As you do for yourself do unto others

Too much Pain... In this World
Too much Pain... In this World

Ask yourself... What is true
Tell yourself... What to do
What will we do... With what we see
Iíll pray for you... Please pray for me

Too much Pain... In this World
Too much Pain... In this World


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Re: Too Much Pain
Reply #1 on: September 26, 2021, 20:04:57
Just off the cuff and without any guarantee of poetic pretension

Open your heart... don't let it happen
Loving is art..... prevent hate snap in
Look around where we go through
Hug your sister... thats what is within you


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Re: Too Much Pain
Reply #2 on: September 27, 2021, 03:39:35
Thanks @Mo its vibrating in the right groove...

Some good thoughts there   :praise:



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