• Too Vanilla - for FAWM
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Too Vanilla - for FAWM
on: February 14, 2021, 10:03:12
« Last Edit: February 14, 2021, 20:47:55 by oorlab »
Somehow @LePlongeur  talked me into joining the February 2021 writing al album in a month project
https://www.songwriter-forum-kitchen.com/forum/songwriting-ingredients/26/fawm-february-album-writing-month/6826/
#FAWM

Here is a start for a lyric. Only the title is fixed, afaiac - borrowed it from @Bill from November Sound

Too Vanilla

You think I'm too vanilla?
You want something rough?
Like King Kong or Godzilla.

The sign on my screen
says, I'm wasting my time.

You seek a crown
Fit for your coronation.
You're all over the place
But you're nowhere

Scratching my head,
how did you go rogue
and turned so bad?

All comments and additions are welcome


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Re: Too Vanilla - for FAWM
Reply #1 on: February 14, 2021, 19:39:48
A nice piece of work @oorlab
@Bill from November Sound will be shocked that his rather bold statement is turned into a beautiful work of art before he knew what was happening.

And before you know it, your two entries are there.
Iím glad you said yes to the invitation.
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Too Vanilla - for FAWM
Reply #2 on: February 14, 2021, 20:37:08
Bold statement?   :o

me @LePlongeur  ?

make a bold statement?   ::)

Coming along nicely @oorlab   :)
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Too Vanilla - for FAWM
Reply #3 on: February 19, 2021, 08:33:52
@oorlab

This lyrics talks somehow to me.
Especially this part

You seek a crown
Fit for your coronation.
You're all over the place
But you're nowhere


I would like to read more and of course I look forward how you'll evolve the whole song!


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Re: Too Vanilla - for FAWM
Reply #4 on: February 20, 2021, 15:24:05
I lovely set of lyrics
Allowing for interpretation and yet so very evocative

Itís just after did towards the end well that takes care of the past tense then you donít need turned
Just turn.

Thanks for sharing



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