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Way in my heart
on: June 17, 2014, 22:35:02
« Last Edit: June 19, 2014, 23:33:39 by fischermans »
Meanings and hints are welcome.It?s planned that it?s sung as an duet.

Way in my heart

Verse 1
You found a way in my heart
you are my light in the dark
please be my shade in the sun
please be my only one

chorus
Be my golden bird
be the reason why life hurts
be the reason my heart is broken
be the reason for all the words we?ve never spoken

Verse 2
You will be my queen when I?m king
high in the sky you be my wings
please be my friend when ever I need
please give me your love guaranteed

chorus
Be my golden bird
be the reason why life hurts
be the reason my heart is broken
be the reason for all the words we?ve never spoken


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Re: Way in my heart
Reply #1 on: June 20, 2014, 14:47:16
nice lyrics, it looks like they flow well

BUT ;D ;D ;D in the verses all is well with the relationship and in the chorus things seem to be wrong....("be the reason why life hurts", be the reason my heart is broken" etc.)

they may be hard to combine, especially in a duet  ??? ??? ???
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Re: Way in my heart
Reply #2 on: June 22, 2014, 13:41:41

  hi fish

 this is a really well crafted lyric,
 but I do agree with dutch something feels wrong with the meaning
 it is a little confusing the person in the song seems to want the other person
 to cause them heartache that doesn't sit right for me

 it could be me and I read it wrong

 but I know you'll get it so right when it comes to the recording of this song

       nice write



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Re: Way in my heart
Reply #3 on: June 22, 2014, 17:07:18
« Last Edit: June 22, 2014, 22:02:59 by fischermans »
Thank you Dutch and Benjo for your words.The love of the person in the song is that big and strong that he also pray for the bad things in life.It?s some kind of poetic. ;D And bear in mind that it?s planned as an duet but my duet partner is a bit slow because the lack of time.
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Re: Way in my heart
Reply #4 on: June 22, 2014, 17:18:10
ha...now you make me very curious...who is the duet partner ::) ::)....anyone we know in the kitchen  ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

come on....Fisch, don't make us gossiping and guessing...


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Re: Way in my heart
Reply #5 on: June 22, 2014, 21:38:12
May be it?s one who is well known but may be he she it is not.



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