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Heart of a woman
on: August 09, 2019, 19:45:46
the "doc stopped running tests and let me out for a while..I can`t stop trying to write and play. thought I`d get back in here
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Heart of a woman

Mix the heart and soul of any woman
with the bluest ocean
brilliant sun.

Borrow just enough perfect from winter
summer`s rainbows
Autumn`s sounds.

Stir-in white clouds
for her constant changing,
a color due
for the distance in her eyes..

A lonesome sound
that rivets your soul
amazement in her touch.

Then add what stops you...
what makes you go on...heart of a Woman"

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Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #1 on: August 09, 2019, 22:08:24
Well, I think that more than poissonier you had to be an alchemist ..
although in reality they are all formulas starting with cooking. @Lane
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #2 on: August 10, 2019, 17:09:41
thanks Mora for taking time to read.     Lane


Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #3 on: August 10, 2019, 17:22:05
@Lane
Wow. Just wow.
 :praise:
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #4 on: August 11, 2019, 21:45:14
« Last Edit: August 11, 2019, 21:47:34 by Lane »
@Bill from November Sound

hi Bill ...how are you.

I haven`t been around for awhile, thanks so much for taking time to read.      Lane


Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #5 on: August 12, 2019, 00:52:56
Very well @Lane ! Good to see you back.  :)


Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #6 on: August 12, 2019, 01:10:08
@Lane
Wow. Just wow.
 :praise:

I'm not quite sure what else to say.....  :)

This is already a song to me. Tell you what, though....I am hearing "The heart of a woman" as a seriously strong hook chorus.

When you write as many songs as Lane Vincent has you're bound to boil down to the very essence of a good song.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #7 on: August 28, 2019, 05:39:05
Beautiful lyrics @Lane so much imagery in so few words... and imagery of the heart 💜 no less!

Masterful  :praise: :thumbsup:


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Re: Heart of a woman
Reply #8 on: August 28, 2019, 15:10:19
i seem to have missed this thread before

beautiful lyrics @Lane  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:
this sounds terrific  ::thumb:: :yes: :yes: :yes:
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