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on: July 02, 2019, 15:26:12
« Last Edit: July 02, 2019, 21:32:51 by Mora Amaro La Loba »
This experimental video plays with the words trying to describe the reflections of the light and the images that it transports.
I enjoyed making the music on which I made the lyrics  but as I'm sure there will be many inaccurate words, it would be great if you told me.

Apart from the question of what is possibly wrong, I think you can enjoy the whole of the story thus reflected.
Thank you.

https://vimeo.com/225584921

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games of light and shadows
that portray anything inert
or that which moves
carrying its presence
through the shadow
in a ray of sun
that looks for any corner
where to leave its mark
intangible
and full of foreign brilliance

Inmobile travel
that removes and puts
realities
there,
where the eye looks,
and catches the time.  (thank you @Bill from November Sound )
its rhythm,
without the world noticing

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that make everything a mirror
even of flesh and blood

Glimpses of what there is
or what there is not

and that touches us
without touching us

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I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
My Youtube channel:
https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCAaK7mFK7fUpf1E99I1Qtow
My Vimeo Songs of Thought channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moraamarolaloba
My Vimeo Downtempo channel:
https://vimeo.com/channels/moramarolalobadowntempo


Re: Highlights
Reply #1 on: July 02, 2019, 19:46:04
Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba  ... you asked for help with English words. Everything looks good except:
1. "Where the eyes looks" - needs to be - where the eyes look  - or  - where the eye looks
2. " and caughts the time" - should be - and catches the time

I have to run right now  but I look forward to checking out the video soon. :yes:
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Highlights
Reply #2 on: July 02, 2019, 20:17:28
Very interesting piece, Mora. I love the sound of your voice over the ambiance of the music....and that little laugh at around 1:00.

Your lyrics capture the feeling of reflections in transition wonderfully and the images carry that feeling nicely as well. Everything is a mirror, even flesh and blood. Can we see ourselves reflected continually in the world around us?
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Reply #3 on: July 04, 2019, 00:45:39
Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba  ... you asked for help with English words. Everything looks good except:
1. "Where the eyes looks" - needs to be - where the eyes look  - or  - where the eye looks
2. " and caughts the time" - should be - and catches the time

I have to run right now  but I look forward to checking out the video soon. :yes:

Perfect! @Bill from November Sound
Thank you very much. Now I have to do again the video.


Re: Highlights
Reply #4 on: July 04, 2019, 00:47:44
Very interesting piece, Mora. I love the sound of your voice over the ambiance of the music....and that little laugh at around 1:00.

Your lyrics capture the feeling of reflections in transition wonderfully and the images carry that feeling nicely as well. Everything is a mirror, even flesh and blood. Can we see ourselves reflected continually in the world around us?

Of course @Leonard Scaper


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Reply #5 on: July 04, 2019, 04:31:45
Hi @Mora Amaro La Loba  ... you asked for help with English words. Everything looks good except:
1. "Where the eyes looks" - needs to be - where the eyes look  - or  - where the eye looks
2. " and caughts the time" - should be - and catches the time

I have to run right now  but I look forward to checking out the video soon. :yes:

Perfect! @Bill from November Sound
Thank you very much. Now I have to do again the video.

Oops ... sorry about that. You can keep it the way it is if you want. It's cool either way.