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My little dove - Poetry music of the day
on: April 13, 2019, 14:56:08
« Last Edit: April 15, 2019, 01:44:03 by Marcus Nalgaber »
My little dove - English language



The flower of my thought

will blossom,

sometime,

when the sadness has gone away

and this is how

I will remember you,

my sweet dove,

without the pain

that I felt upon losing you

and upon not touching

your alive, gray and iridescent feather

so warm,

little dove that came to me hurt

and that left alive in me

the trace of your innocence

and of your calm gaze,

tiny heart that already beat in my soul,

great affection that you sowed in me,

little friend that followed my steps

looking for the comfort of my company,

love that grew day by day

and that joined both of us together,

divine gift that I no longer have,

memory that I am covering

with your timid and simple image,

courageous messenger that finally flew again

taking with it my smile and my dreams.

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Palomita mía - Spanish language



Ya saldrá la flor de mi pensamiento,

cuando se vaya la tristeza,

y así te podré recordar,

palomita mía,

sin el dolor que sentí al perderte

y al no volver a tocar

tu pluma tibia,

gris e irisada y tan viva,

palomita que me llegaste herida

y que dejaste en mí

la huella de tu inocencia

y de tu mirada tranquila,

corazoncito pequeño

que ya en mi alma latía,

cariño inmenso que sembraste en mí,

amor que día a día iba creciendo

y que a las dos nos unía,

amiga pequeña que seguías mis pasos

buscando el consuelo de mi compañía,

regalo divino que ya no tengo,

recuerdo que voy vistiendo

con tu imagen tímida y sencilla,

mensajera valiente

que por fin volvió a volar,

llevándose con ella mi risa y mi soñar.

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Best regards,

Marcus Nalgaber


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Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #1 on: April 13, 2019, 18:02:57
I am in the studio today and this piece is a perfect compliment to what I am working on......such a beautifully delicate performance from both of you.

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Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #2 on: April 14, 2019, 09:43:18
No matter how much I envy your courage to make an English poem-version, I still prefer the Spanish one.
Great demonstration of the sample card you have in your sleeve, waiting to be 'magiced' out.
Very nice piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus



Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #3 on: April 14, 2019, 12:58:12
I am in the studio today and this piece is a perfect compliment to what I am working on......such a beautifully delicate performance from both of you.

@Leonard Scaper Many Thanks  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #4 on: April 14, 2019, 12:59:14
No matter how much I envy your courage to make an English poem-version, I still prefer the Spanish one.
Great demonstration of the sample card you have in your sleeve, waiting to be 'magiced' out.
Very nice piece of work!
Kind regards, Gus

@LePlongeur Many Thanks  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::


Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #5 on: April 14, 2019, 13:17:48
This is beautiful. So personal, touching, raw, and as @Leonard Scaper said, delicate. You two share the same stem.  :thumbsup:
Do what makes your heart sing :)


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Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #6 on: April 14, 2019, 21:23:43
This is beautiful @Marcus Nalgaber and @Mora Amaro La Loba .. Touched me to the bone. Goosebumps here.
It was very helpful to listen to the english version to find out what this song might be about.
The spanish version is more native to @Mora Amaro La Loba I guess, and  looove the expression in that version.
Thank you for sharing this with us.. that was special!
Cheers!
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Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #7 on: April 15, 2019, 00:29:11
This is beautiful. So personal, touching, raw, and as @Leonard Scaper said, delicate. You two share the same stem.  :thumbsup:

Thank you @Kellyanneg


Re: My little dove - Poetry music of the day
Reply #8 on: April 15, 2019, 00:30:20
Thank you @Mar T.
 Yes, Spanish version is "original feeling".



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