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Offline Lane

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Revenge,
« on: February 09, 2018, 00:22:51 »
a old write on Revenge

I`m here to avenge nothing
the task was well preformed.
Im here the moment, gone forever
the better choice, no tear.

I stand in silence,
amoung the rubble
they don`t know me never will.

Some tasks a bounty..
some tasks were pain..
these memories will fade.

Forever after,
hollow thought..
for a giver and taker in life.

What you see
is your own creation
and might scare you.

what I am has wept, and forgiven...Vincent


Stir

Sun-up, I stir
flannel bedding,
its warm, my first thought.

Close my eyes
evading the day,
don`t want another thought.

Given days there it is..
"how I loved
and blue the sky,
clear the heart,
how needing ruled the act.
Desperate minutes,
and all that mattered,
how love, long coming back"

Sun-up, and stir...I almost forgot that" Vincent

Offline Leonard Scaper

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Re: Revenge,
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2018, 13:45:41 »
Good stuff.....demands multiple readings.

Doing just that right now.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: Revenge,
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2018, 21:45:53 »
I`ll stick a couple of writes in here every once in a while Leonard 
maybe someone will get and idea from them. thanks so much for commenting. they don`t say a lot but you all let me stick them in here..

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Re: Revenge,
« Reply #3 on: February 11, 2018, 16:36:32 »
cool lyrics @Lane  ::thumb::
I lost it...ages ago


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