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Title: I just can't stop
Post by: acoustic-alice on June 13, 2016, 15:40:45
So whilst baby was asleep, I had more songspiration! Tuning in my voice isn't that great on this (bummer). But please let me know your thoughts on the song itself!

https://soundcloud.com/acousticalice/alice-june-original

If we stayed here all day
would we feel much better?
if we shouted and we screamed?
would it all just diappear

 you blamed me, i blamed you
you almost walked out on me

Like a ship that's sinking we were going nowhere
Like a climber on the rocks, we were nearly falling
But we'll push on through these times, together with our hands held tightly
we will make it, we will take it, we will not be destroyed

Lets mend our hearts
I'll help you, if you help me too
Soon we'll see the brighter days
This will all become in a haze

You won't blame me, I won't blame you
together we will make it through

Like a ship that's sailing, all mighty and upstanding
Like wild horses running free, we'll love wrecklessly
we will push on through these times, together with our held held tightly
we will make it, we will take it, we will not be destroyed