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Title: Love Is Easy - Secret message???
Post by: BumbleWasps on September 06, 2016, 14:00:13
I've written a song and on the face of it it seems like a normal love song but there is a secret message in the lyrics about masturbation and falling in love with a pornstar.
I'd love for you guys to listen to the sound and see if you pick up on this.
Is the message too secret?? or is it really obvious??
let me know what you think? it's open to interpretation, i'd love to know how you see it!
Thanks
https://soundcloud.com/bumblewasps/love-is-easy-new-music-free-download
Title: Re: Love Is Easy - Secret message???
Post by: Jim on September 06, 2016, 14:27:51
Hi there @BumbleWasps... welcome to the kitchen!  Pull up a chair, grab a beer and make yourself at home!  ;D

That's an unusual name...my wife wouldn't like it - she's terrified of wasps and bees!  :o

Nice sound you've got going on there...this track reminds me of "Brown Eyed Girl" by Van Morrison, even in the same key I think?  :-\

You might want to post the lyrics up, that's what folk normally do here, especially if you post on the lyrics board, plus some people don't have English as a first language so it helps them too.  ;)

As for the subtext...yeah that's pretty obvious, right from the offset.  :P
Title: Re: Love Is Easy - Secret message???
Post by: Dutchbeat on September 07, 2016, 18:35:24
Hi @BumbleWasps

yes, that is a great track, I like it a lot

about your hidden message and twist in your track.....

we happen to start a new songwriting competition on this forum soon, in which the challenge is:

write a love song with a twist, in a music genre you have never written in before...

but back on topic, great music this, nice Hawaian, summery twist...cool bass  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::