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Board index => Songs for review => Topic started by: Binladeda on January 05, 2014, 22:30:27

Title: No good
Post by: Binladeda on January 05, 2014, 22:30:27
  This is a good example of a song of mine that I would call unfinished.....but others have told me it's fine as it is !
  What do you think ??

  To my mind it needs a counter melody, a stronger chorus, some BV's, and more harmonies. I could go on ;D  The 'concept' is
  there...but still a long way to go.

  https://soundcloud.com/binladeda/no-good/s-Ssbl3 

Title: Re: No good
Post by: Dutchbeat on January 06, 2014, 18:43:14
i love the beat, sounds pretty finished too, i would add female backing vocals doubling your vocal and female vocals doing oohs and ahhhs


pretty good, that vocal melody

cool, BIN  8) 8) 8)

Title: Re: No good
Post by: jmacdon on January 17, 2014, 23:39:16
i would add female backing vocals doubling your vocal and female vocals doing oohs and ahhhs

OMG, this is exactly what I was thinking !  A female vocal will not only enhance the song, but give it that extra ooomph it deserves.     

As always, I tip my hat with respect to your talent   8)