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Title: New acoustic love song
Post by: acoustic-alice on November 23, 2016, 19:21:34
Howdy. Does anyone want to expand on this song?

https://youtu.be/IZDIpBkMMjY

Any feedback welcomed!
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 23, 2016, 21:58:37
Deleted - V  ;D
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 23, 2016, 23:31:17
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Vince
 
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 24, 2016, 16:00:23
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Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: M57 on November 24, 2016, 17:12:53
Was finally able to download in order to listen to this. Love the chorus.

So where is Vince's version?
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 24, 2016, 17:36:54
Deleted link _v  ;D
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: M57 on November 24, 2016, 18:04:49
https://soundcloud.com/vincentaylor/a-demo-foracoustic-alicewav

Here is the linlk @M57  I've been trying to find a way to send it to Alice over the internet, but the file is to big

I use wetransfer.com for large files.  Private link and the file disappears after a few weeks.
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Zedd on November 24, 2016, 21:44:22
How lovely to hear a new song from you @acoustic-alice ! Pretty song, so gentle and calming... @vincent_stewart version lovely also. It does sound different but it's got that same gentle feel and the song sounds like one of those songs that's always been around...

What a lovely lift to my evening listening to both!

Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 24, 2016, 23:23:08
Thank you for listening @Zedd - the reason I write is I don't do covers very well - heck, I don't even play my own the same way twice. But is was nice therapy for me to cover one of @acoustic-alice 's songs again.

Winter is setting in and my fingers are stiffening up, so I could only strum and not finger pick. Anyway I hope she isn't feeling "Look What They've Done To MY Song Ma"

Vince 
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Jurgen on November 25, 2016, 00:01:35
great version @vincent_stewart - I really like this and it's a great cover of @acoustic-alice song without it being a copy.

I always prefer a cover to have something different about it - otherwise why listen to the cover?

Karma to you both!
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 25, 2016, 15:40:38
Thank you @Jurgen I'm glad you liked it. Made my day.

V
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Dutchbeat on November 26, 2016, 13:38:38
@acoustic-alice i agree with, Zedd, that sounds like an instant evergreen....very nice melody!

and @vincent_stewart , i could hear your version, SC says "track may have been removed"
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 26, 2016, 15:14:24
Deleted link
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Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Dutchbeat on November 26, 2016, 15:41:01
sounds great, @vincent_stewart great vibes and emotion come accross in how you sing this

i think it is very nice

some minor mixing suggestions, teh slide gitar comes in to loud in my opinion, those first notes, and i think they are panned to hard left, well in my opinion, and the mouth harp perhaps a bit too far right?

but never mind that, a lovely version and performance of this song from @acoustic-alice  ::thumb:: ::thumb::
Title: Re: New acoustic love song
Post by: Vince on November 27, 2016, 01:17:59
I can actually fix that @Dutchbeat and will. My fingers aren't working too well these days, I'm more disappointed in the guitar part - I'm a finger picker who can't finger pick - I've found some compression gloves that may fix the problem - we'll see.

But that you so much for listening and taking the time to respond.

V