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Title: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on July 10, 2019, 21:58:09
Indifference is a word that always portrays a void

The other side of my indifference


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oADMXehMLfM (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oADMXehMLfM)


The other side
of my indifference
is full of shadows
and words unsaid

The other side
of my indifference
is full of shadows
and words unsaid

And while the world
continues running
around an old sun,

And while the world
continues running
around an old sun,
an old sun,
an old sun,

I am trapped,
I am trapped
in a balloon
prisoner of the inertia

I am trapped
I am trapped
in a ballon
prisoner of the inertia

Following
Following
Following

Following a circle
and tied to a rope
attached
to some center

following a circle
and tied to a rope
attached to some center

Following
even having wings x 3

The other side
of my indifference
is full of shadows
and words unsaid

The other side
of my indifference
is full of shadows
and words unsaid

And while the world
continues running
around an old sun,

And while the world
continues running
around an old sun,
an old sun,
an old sun,

I am trapped,
I am trapped
in
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: LePlongeur on July 11, 2019, 11:43:09
I canít picture you indifferent, @Mora Amaro La Loba .
Love the plane at 0,40 seconds. Poetic surprise.
Love the song/video as a whole.
Another great achievement, Mora.
A class in itself.
Kind regards, Gus
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Layerson on July 11, 2019, 13:56:49
Iím always impressed by how well your videos and music go together and then thereís a message hidden in the lyrics as well, kinda sneaks up at ya, me at least.

Getting swept in by the suggestive beats and the visuals, this is a thumbs up song and if I may say so, in a typical  @Mora Amaro La Loba style, so whatís not to like about that!  ::thumb::

Great production   ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone:: ::headphone::

 ::Rachel::
/Micke
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Kajetan Zduniak on July 11, 2019, 18:14:24
i really like how poetic it is!
beautiful connection between natural clean vocal and modern sounding backing track
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Dutchbeat on July 11, 2019, 18:49:37
fantastic @Mora Amaro La Loba  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

what a great video and music, a work of art  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: robertkc on July 12, 2019, 19:02:52
The intro on this is brilliant @Mora Amaro La Loba . The harpsichord? giving way to electronic elements sets this song apart right away.
I also liked the rhythmic repetition in the lyrics- there`s a trance feel to your music here.
I think you are improving the quality  and melding of images to music more with each video.
Very cool  ::thumb:: ::thumb::

Robert
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Jurgen on July 13, 2019, 02:09:34
Another great combination of song and video @Mora Amaro La Loba

Your songs have such a hypnotic calming feel to them and I'm always impressed with the way you produce the videos as well.

I really like this one and especially the words:

And while the world
continues running
around an old sun,

Such a great image and opens up a lot of ideas and thoughts.

cheers
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Leonard Scaper on July 13, 2019, 18:59:57
Wow! This is a really good one, Mora. The music creates such wonderful movement and your voice rides it beautifully.

The video is very cool as well......love the use of bright and dark.

That very first verse sets up the lyrics SO well:

The other side
of my indifference
is full of shadows
and words unsaid


I know that even you have some indifference, Mora, tucked in the shadowed corners of your effervescent soul.

 :)

Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Goatrelated on July 15, 2019, 20:51:56
WOW what a BEAUTIFUL creation. I love your voice Mora and the music and video is as always impressive. The poetry is stunning.
WOW

 ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: MrBouzouki on July 15, 2019, 21:08:06
I love how this track springs into life @Mora Amaro La Loba ... and your videos are always so original

The way you include visual and musical elements so well always impresses me. 

A great track and overall artistic experience

 ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN:: ::OSMAN::
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: AshBordeaux on July 16, 2019, 16:03:25
There is such a strong spiritual currency underlying your music.
You got a fan in me.
I get the same sort of chills from your work as when I first heard Antony & The Johnsons's  'Hope There's Someone'
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on July 19, 2019, 22:08:31
@LePlongeur   @Layerson    @Kajetan Zduniak    @Dutchbeat     @robertkc     @Jurgen     @Leonard Scaper     @Goatrelated
@MrBouzouki    @AshBordeaux

Thank you very much for your time and your words. I hope everyone is able to enjoy the outdoors as I am doing in spite of the heat, something that becomes news making us forget that the summer in which we think so much when the winter wears out, also has fun.

 ::heart::
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Goatrelated on July 22, 2019, 06:54:08
something that becomes news making us forget that the summer in which we think so much when the winter wears out, also has fun.

You are so right!
I'm fully enjoying the heat, as I'm fully enjoying every step of the way.....
Title: Re: The other side of my indifference
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on July 23, 2019, 15:30:38
something that becomes news making us forget that the summer in which we think so much when the winter wears out, also has fun.

You are so right!
I'm fully enjoying the heat, as I'm fully enjoying every step of the way.....

Hola @Goatrelated
haha Yes, I am happy seeing you enjoying EVERY step of the way!!!!
Where is your picture?    Sure a new one will appear soon...

If sometimes you are thinking to visit Spain... here I am.  ::heart::