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Title: Dr Roberts Remarkable Restorative
Post by: robertkc on July 18, 2019, 18:52:20
Coming up with cures for the  hurts of your kids can be challenging. While trying to treat a warty toe I had this idea for a cure-all.

https://soundcloud.com/user-564042721/dr-roberts-remarkable-restorative-with-scottc   (https://soundcloud.com/user-564042721/dr-roberts-remarkable-restorative-with-scottc)

My comrade Scott got into his George guitars.

 
Dr Robert`s Remarkable Restorative


Ebeneezer Temperance Elders
say its a saviour a bottle of calm
Professor Huffnpuff`s Purgative Oil
the Judge ruled an inferior balm
better its better

Dr Robert`s Remarkable Restorative
will never let you down
rub it in shake it on apply globally
chill your whole world down
chill you down

rest and be thankful
the universal cure is here

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with crossed lover`s wine
a blunderbuss in the vitals
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Dr Robert`s Remarkable Restorative
will never let you down
rub it in shake it on applied globally
chill your whole world down
chill you down

rest and be thankful
the universal cure is here
what don`t kill you makes you stronger
for the one and only pure elixir
trust Dr Robert

Robert Cordrey May, 2019
Title: Re: Dr Roberts Remarkable Restorative
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on July 21, 2019, 21:15:33
Hi @robertkc

Your song has surprised me from the beginning, although I do not know what I expected to hear ... and little by little, I got into it. I enjoyed your change of melody to close the verses "better its better"  "chill you down", and how you solve melodically speaking some of the phrases ... The lyrics have also surprised me. I think I'm getting too serious...   that's why I've been glad to get into it and get out of my I do not know what.
 It has been a very pleasant experience. ::thumb::
Title: Re: Dr Roberts Remarkable Restorative
Post by: Leonard Scaper on July 22, 2019, 13:03:52
That was fun!

Great lyrics in a dynamic arrangement that flows nicely. I really like the guitar work and the vocal production as well.
Title: Re: Dr Roberts Remarkable Restorative
Post by: robertkc on July 22, 2019, 18:51:39
I`m indulging my wacky side here @Mora Amaro La Loba ...having kids does that for you. I listened to a few Beatles songs for ideas on the bgv.
Thanks for the nod to vocals @Leonard Scaper . The harmonies had to be tighter than I`m used to, so this one was a learning as well as fun experience.

Robert