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Title: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 06, 2020, 14:01:02
The rain always leaves us with the same echoes, water that became air to travel through the sky and that tastes like seas and lakes and rivers tied to its banks ... Rain that reveals the landscapes of the souls that drink it through the gaze.

Feliz 2020!!!! Mora

https://youtu.be/np1kYq5QDRg

It rains
It rains
in the night of my soul
while the hours walk
lost in the distance

It rains
It rains
in my eyes and in my face
a water of salt and almonds
that transforms me in nostalgia
that transforms me in nostalgia

And under that rain
the shadows are no longer shadows
but wells that are filled
with the echoes of my childhood
with the echoes of my childhood

it rains life
it rains crying
it rains seas of words
that are nothing today

it rains life
it rains crying
it rains seas of words
that are nothing today

It rains
In the kisses that I gave
that I gave gave gave

In the kisses that I gave
that I gave gave gave
Title: Re: Nude Music - That rain
Post by: Leonard Scaper on January 06, 2020, 17:44:03
Another really beautiful piece, Mora @Mora Amaro La Loba , both musically and visually. Rain is truly a wonderful vehicle for music.
Title: Re: Nude Music - That rain
Post by: LePlongeur on January 07, 2020, 09:29:01
Nude music? Please don't tell me it's a coincidence.
Running (nude) through the rain as a child....
I vividly remember that.
This is what good music does for people.
Great!
Kind regards, Gus
Title: Re: Nude Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 07, 2020, 20:14:08
Another really beautiful piece, Mora @Mora Amaro La Loba , both musically and visually. Rain is truly a wonderful vehicle for music.

Hi @Leonard Scaper
Feliz 2020!!! :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:

Thank you, I love this song, it has something special to me.
Mora
Title: Re: Nude Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 07, 2020, 20:17:53
Nude music? Please don't tell me it's a coincidence.
Running (nude) through the rain as a child....
I vividly remember that.
This is what good music does for people.
Great!
Kind regards, Gus


Hi @LePlongeur

Yes, you are right, a lot of children chan remember moments like the one you say, playing to chase life, naked of anything but purity .. Rivers, seas, forests, everything was the adventure of innocence!!!  :pompom: :pompom:
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Dutchbeat on January 07, 2020, 20:20:11
Feliz 2020  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup: to you too @Mora Amaro La Loba   :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

great piece of music, and the lyrics did....get me thinking, about water  ::) ::) and rain...  :o :o :o :o great song  :thumbsup: :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


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Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: oorlab on January 07, 2020, 22:05:51
@Mora Amaro La Loba  - fascinating music and video. I like the subtle surreality of lines such as "while the hours walk". And the Spanish works well. Have you got the lyrics also written out in Spanish? And would you post the audio on soundcloud too? I think there folks who would be quite interested too.
Good luck with the music!
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Bill from November Sound on January 08, 2020, 04:32:25
Great work @Mora Amaro La Loba !!!  :)
First I was just listening to the music and, as you know, I love real Spain Spanish.  :) It sounds so good.
Then that "que me transforma en "nostalgia" " part I looked and you were being painted in a painting...  :D so cool! Then the rain comes down. The song is cool and the video matches the song.
Good show!
-11 ::Note::
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mo on January 08, 2020, 13:12:06
Wow @Mora ! Love the atmosphere and the whole sound - the soften song comes so beautiful in and then you drag it in your very own style again with the vocals.
It give a view to the delicate and scared inside of the song-me. I really love that style. Well done to all who took a part with it.
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 08, 2020, 20:43:47
[quote author=Dutchbeat link=topic=5932.msg63623#msg63623 date=1578424811

great piece of music, and the lyrics did....get me thinking, about water  ::) ::) and rain...  :

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Frohes neues 2020 @Dutchbeat  :pompom: :pompom:
Water and rain, of course, they are the best drivers  ::smiley:: ::smiley::
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 08, 2020, 20:59:02
@Mora Amaro La Loba  - fascinating music and video. I like the subtle surreality of lines such as "while the hours walk". And the Spanish works well. Have you got the lyrics also written out in Spanish? And would you post the audio on soundcloud too? I think there folks who would be quite interested too.
Good luck with the music!

Thanks for your advice @oorlab
I am not in Soundcloud, I am a closed world in my desires
I have heard sometimes and always by chance the music of others with my music and I have seen others publish all or part of my texts as if they were their own ... I am aware that by sharing my ideas they may fall into the hands of others as it has already happened ... But that is the internet for small creators, we are the source with which another earns. Of course, at least I put an audio mark on my music so they don't sell it on spotify and similars...

I may seem stupid, and in fact I am for many, but I do not want to waste my time fighting for what I will not take when I die, so I do, paint my time, enjoy that treasure.

Mora
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 08, 2020, 21:02:04
Great work @Mora Amaro La Loba !!!  :)
First I was just listening to the music and, as you know, I love real Spain Spanish.  :) It sounds so good.
Then that "que me transforma en "nostalgia" " part I looked and you were being painted in a painting...  :D so cool! Then the rain comes down. The song is cool and the video matches the song.
Good show!
-11 ::Note::

Thank you @Bill from November Sound
Yes, I like very much this part. This painting... I did it 9 years ago, changed it twice and now I'll repaint it!!! It has a heavy story behind.
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 08, 2020, 21:12:22
Wow @Mora ! Love the atmosphere and the whole sound - the soften song comes so beautiful in and then you drag it in your very own style again with the vocals.
It give a view to the delicate and scared inside of the song-me. I really love that style. Well done to all who took a part with it.
Hola @Mo
Thank you. Marcus made the intro instruments with his guitar using simulators... And the sound bass... so wonderful.
I wish you a 2020 full of smiles.
Mora ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Soultanz on January 09, 2020, 13:34:34
I can feel the drops on my skin, so strong is the breath of atmosphere,
not just in hectopascal, you're so good at that. I always feel like beeing in a movie when listening
and not only watching it , but beeing part of it somehow. That's ART, MORA.
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 10, 2020, 21:56:12

Hi @Chris Spruit
wow!!  Thank you very much, You are very kind, you make me feel real. ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart::
Love your hectopascal!!!

Mora
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Jurgen on January 19, 2020, 23:26:20
Such a great feel to your songs @Mora Amaro La Loba and this is no exception.

You manage to create a relaxing mood so quickly.

I also like it when you sing in Spanish.

The subject matter as others have mentioned is a really good one. Rain is very pertinent for us Aussies right now as we're in severe drought. Some parts of the country and storms and finally received some heavy rain. When others talk of rain and children, it's a different experience for some here. Where rain hasn't fallen for years in some parts, this was the first rain some children had ever seen or felt. Seeing video of kids diving into mud and huge smiles on their faces is a great sight to see.

cheers
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: robertkc on January 21, 2020, 21:14:40
You certainly "paint my time" @Mora Amaro La Loba with another wonderfully whole experience of music and image.
Your vocals in Spanish are warm and hypnotic; the visuals amazingly well matched with the sounds.

Robert
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 22, 2020, 13:12:04
Hola @Jurgen !!
Thank you very much for your time!!!
Yes, rain and fire, 2 necessary but terrible elements when they go crazy ...
Your country is starring in devastating news that shows us that we are... nothing ...
Here in Spain we also suffer the fire when summer comes, forests and mountains devoured by the flames, not as it is happening now in yours but equally devastating, the most incomprehensible is that many of them are caused by the hand of man, arsonist, people who want their land not to be subject to environmental laws, others to sell cheap timber, that is, a stupid way to sow hunger ...
cheers
Mora
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 22, 2020, 13:16:09

Hi @robertkc
Muchas gracias!! I love my Spanish language but I have very little public scope with my songs in Spanish ... It's a pity! That's why I'm happy when my song in Spanish has some public reach.

Mora
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Jurgen on January 22, 2020, 21:57:51
as a slight aside re the fires.

we have heard that a lot of overseas reporting talks of arson as being a cause. The number of man lit fires is around is very very low  - but we've had 1000s of fires lit by lightening etc.

also the embers burn for days and when the hot wind picks up they start new fires - some embers are taken kms by the wind to start new fires.

Anyway - sorry for the digression away from your great song!

cheers

Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 24, 2020, 14:44:08
Hola @Jurgen

Whatever the causes, it is terrible, a hell that has no doors that can be closed... 
Cheers

Mora
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Monty Cash Music on January 24, 2020, 19:53:51
It's a beautiful song with entrancing lyrics/poetry.

I feel it could be the sound track to some flight over fields and forests in varying weathers.

The vocals in the mix, personally are too prominent and could sit back a bit more. Says the man who likes vocals right up front overtaking everything. Well it's different when you see it in other people's mixes. I suppose that's why we review each other's works. While the vocals are the feature, they will never stop being that feature if they were just a little bit less loud in the mix. It will allow for a greater reduction into the trance of that dream of an open field covered by weather.

I realise half the aim of the song is to express this beautiful poetry but it can also be overpowering. Just my opinion.
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 26, 2020, 13:11:30
It's a beautiful song with entrancing lyrics/poetry.

I feel it could be the sound track to some flight over fields and forests in varying weathers.

The vocals in the mix, personally are too prominent and could sit back a bit more. Says the man who likes vocals right up front overtaking everything. Well it's different when you see it in other people's mixes. I suppose that's why we review each other's works. While the vocals are the feature, they will never stop being that feature if they were just a little bit less loud in the mix. It will allow for a greater reduction into the trance of that dream of an open field covered by weather.

I realise half the aim of the song is to express this beautiful poetry but it can also be overpowering. Just my opinion.

Hola @Monty Cash Music
Rhak you for your time!!! Yes, the voice could be a little bit less loud... But, I always have the same problem with the volume of my voice, maybe the speakers..
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Monty Cash Music on January 26, 2020, 18:19:23
@Mora Amaro La Loba

I would suggest trying the following... compressing and normalizing the vocals a bit so the less loud bits are louder and the loud loud bits sit a bit further back in the mix, then try turning it down a bit, or if it's a bit sharp just take a bit of treble off. Then get a second opinion. Experiment with a couple of mixes. Then if you like the sound and you know what's going on, replicate it in future recordings.
Title: Re: Nu Music - That rain
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 28, 2020, 22:22:08
WIw! thank you very much @Monty Cash Music
You are very kind. I always try many ways of doing.... hahahaha