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Title: Back Pockets
Post by: Redlady on March 24, 2020, 15:24:10
Back Pockets

© 2020 Schantell Wharton/ John Schutt–Male Lead

This is lyric only. No demo yet. Open to collaboration or rewrite. Open to music to if you want to collaborate. I wanted a fun upbeat country vibe.

V1
My eyes went out of there sockets
when I noticed your back pockets
Those jeans talk when you walk
Hips so thick and sweet
My heart skipped a beat
My hands are honey
I want to pour all over you
I could not  to look away
I feel like a fool
Honey I love your back pockets
I love your back pockets-2x

Ch
I love your back pockets-2x
I love your curves
I am losing my nerve
I love the way you move
My hands want to touch
What I love so much
Can I touch your back pockets?
Honey, I love your back pockets-2x

V2
When I look at you I fall into  a trance
Your shake and your roll are my dream dance
I get lost  in the way you move
My fantasy is to be in your groove
Can I touch your back pockets
Put my eyes back in there socket
I just want to ease into one little squeeze
Honey, I love your back pockets
I love your back pockets-2x

Ch
I love your back pockets-2x
I love your curves
I am losing my nerve
I love the way you move
My hands when I want to touch
What I love so much
Can I touch your back pockets?
Honey, I love your back pockets-2x

Title: Re: Back Pockets
Post by: LePlongeur on March 25, 2020, 09:53:27
Yes, I love this very very much. You dig right into the nature of the beast.

Honest. That's what I like about them. About the back pockets too. Also honest.
The Hollies had 'Wiggle that whotsit'. One of their finest but strangely absent on almost every Best of. And it was a reasonable successful single at the time.

And you propose to let it be sung by a guy? I know women who would love the lyrics and deal with it in a convincing way. And women who love  back pockets on a girl's  bum too.

Very curious where this will lead you!
Every time you surprise me. In a very pleasant way.
Kind regards, Gus
Title: Re: Back Pockets
Post by: Redlady on March 25, 2020, 10:56:33
Hi Gus
 :pompom: Thanks for the the encouragement and commenting on the lyric. ::thumb::
Sincerely Schantell--Redlady