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Title: Nines
Post by: redmando on January 03, 2021, 12:32:02
Just a little minimalist midi tune. No words.

https://soundcloud.com/steve-gray-songwriting/nines (https://soundcloud.com/steve-gray-songwriting/nines)
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: Mo on January 03, 2021, 12:59:55
Reminds me of the playing of an organist who accompanies churchgoers to Holy Communion through his organ playing.

Comment is without any evaluation  ::Rachel:: ;)
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: Mora Amaro La Loba on January 05, 2021, 13:16:14
Just a little minimalist midi tune. No words.

https://soundcloud.com/steve-gray-songwriting/nines (https://soundcloud.com/steve-gray-songwriting/nines)
Really relaxing, something wonderful for these times, it has a childhood essence
Mora
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: LePlongeur on January 06, 2021, 10:00:28
I like it a lot.
Are you sure you don't want any vocals to help it along?
Whatever your choice, I like it a whole lot.
Keep them coming!
Kind regards, Gus
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: redmando on January 11, 2021, 19:41:57
Thanks for your comments @Mo , @Mora Amaro La Loba and @LePlongeur . Your reactions are quite different, which I find fascinating. I wasn't intending this to be a song Gus, but you are welcome to take it further.....
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: Mo on January 11, 2021, 20:03:47
@redmando I just hope you felt not insulted by my comment. I still want have explain a bit more as it was too short maybe ;D

I got a quick association back to my childhood when i listend .
 I was forced from early age on  to visit church each sunday. And this was so so incredible boring, there was just one  good highlight to me during that neverending hour when the organ player did some interesting  freestyle playing during the time I mentioned above and when people left church... so rather my comment was positive meaned. I'm sorry afterward not have expressed otherwise  ;)
Title: Re: Nines
Post by: redmando on January 11, 2021, 21:05:49
@redmando I just hope you felt not insulted by my comment. I still want have explain a bit more as it was too short maybe ;D

I got a quick association back to my childhood when i listend .
 I was forced from early age on  to visit church each sunday. And this was so so incredible boring, there was just one  good highlight to me during that neverending hour when the organ player did some interesting  freestyle playing during the time I mentioned above and when people left church... so rather my comment was positive meaned. I'm sorry afterward not have expressed otherwise  ;)
There was certainly no offence taken @Mo . In fact, your comment was very valid - I had not thought of my tune in that way, but I do now! Nines was built on mathematical sequences of nine notes, which I then moved about to make, hopefully, more musical. Perhaps this is what the skilled church organist does in his/her head when he/she is improvising? Best wishes, Steve.

Title: Re: Nines
Post by: MrBouzouki on January 12, 2021, 18:40:14
An interesting progression of notes and just maybe a possibly for a competition if you were happy for others to take this and see what they could do with it. From little acorns and all that.

I love the photo of Malcolm by the way, a proper footballer when football was less but also so much more than it is today.