@M57 ..the song progresses it could be upped with percussion..
I agree it needs more percussion. That's usually the last step for me. I like to deliver an all but unfinished set of stems to a drummer so they know where the spaces are and can play as if it were live and they were responding and interacting with the other musicians. Also, I'm still not convinced the form is right.
..and I think with some more bass accents..
This is tricky territory. I love cool bass accents, but I'm a hack on the fretless ..so the less I play, the better I sound.
But seriously, and more importantly, I need the band to support the song and not detract from the vocal. I'm not sure from who or where, but I seem to recall that someone mentioned that they thought the bass was too notey in places. That's all I needed to hear.
Lots of percussionists on the forum, as well as multi-instrumentalists. Feel free to ask any of them? 
Drums are pretty much the only thing that I outsource. I can usually get away with playing everything else. When I need drums, I've been using n professional (whom I've never met). He does the work remotely in his studio. I really like the quality of his both his playing and recordings, but I'm always open to options. I don't know who the drummers are here.
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@Mar T. can do something about it....or else he would have 
