• - Don't forget but don't you dwell - 3rdMarch2016
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1st  post for a couple of weeks, only done 3 or 4 songs, I got a new guitar (PRS Custom SE24) so been having fun practicing on that and playing piano, a wee break from recording, but I think Im gonna get back on the recording wagon again.
Didn't really think about the lyrics they just came at the time of recording.

https://soundcloud.com/moles-1/dont-forget-but-dont-you-dwell

 Don't forget but don't you dwell -

Are the blinding lightning bolts still to blame for all your faults,
all the skin and bones you own still condone while you trombone,
all those feelings that you have still entice an honest laugh,
tremble in your knees still moving like the trees,

All these feelings that you have don't have to be bad,
there is room for happy days when you look back you'll be glad,
bad vibes will leave your soul, leave you with more control,
so you can be yourself, leave behind that someone else,

All these feelings that you have don't have to be bad,
there is room for happy days when you look back you'll be glad,
bad vibes will leave your soul, leave you with more control,
so you can be yourself, leave behind that someone else,

malady's be yesterday strange to think you thought that way,
being so oblivious when it is now so obvious,
don't forget but don't you dwell, just the way you found yourself,
now I find it crucial just to keep it simple.

All these feelings that you have don't have to be bad,
there is room for happy days when you look back you'll be glad,
bad vibes will leave your soul, leave you with more control,
so you can be yourself, leave behind that someone else.

https://soundcloud.com/moles-1/dont-forget-but-dont-you-dwell


Re: - Don't forget but don't you dwell - 3rdMarch2016
Reply #1 on: March 06, 2016, 11:58:16
There is some really cool guitar work on this track.  I wish I could nail solos like this.  The section that begins at 2:14 is particularly sweet.  I like how the the guitar and piano play with each other.  And then, when the second guitar comes in, the track is really interesting. 

I'm not sure I like the effect on the vocals, but that's just me.  Maybe with another listening, I feel differently. 


Re: - Don't forget but don't you dwell - 3rdMarch2016
Reply #2 on: March 06, 2016, 15:23:29
I totally agree about the guitar - I like the song - also I like the picture of the cat on the unicorn - if I was just browsing I would click on the song because of the cover. Vince
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Re: - Don't forget but don't you dwell - 3rdMarch2016
Reply #3 on: March 07, 2016, 04:54:02
I also like the song especially the guitar work.

You have a very unique style and I'm trying to think what (if anything) it reminds me of.

A little bit of early Pink Floyd maybe?

Anyway, I look forward to your songs, they always make me smile.

cheers

Jurgen



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