• -My Light -
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Reply #15 on: June 24, 2016, 18:56:57
This came out quite well. Builds really well. Guitar sounds fantastic. Love is rare indeed. Some profound songwriting. I always thought it would be wonderful to have a song written about me, so I hope your girlfriend appreciates it, because it really is quite beautiful. It is such a powerful thing to feel emotion and then take that emotion and create a poem or words around the feeling of the moment. It's the highest form of human communication.


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Reply #16 on: June 24, 2016, 21:42:00
@Stan Johanson Totally agree with you, we have the same references ! :P Thank your for your feedback, means a lot Stan, happy you enjoyed it :)

@The DCS Project Totally agree, music is a great form of communication and I'm glad to meet lovers of music here ! Thank you rlly much for your kind words I really appreciate it and I'm happy you got the true feeling of my song :).

PS : Yeah my gf appreciates, she loves music and -what I do I think- ; and has always encouraged me !

Alann  ::Hoss::
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Reply #17 on: June 25, 2016, 01:46:56
@acoustic-alice Thank you very much Alice ! :) Haha Naaaaaah I smoke rolled cigarettes (for the details) but I thought swichin on was like... light it up !! Grrr didn't know that, thank your for your feedback gonna need to change it :)


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Reply #18 on: June 26, 2016, 18:43:25
Ha, I missed this one, but the track seems to be no longer available via Soundcloud....

@Alann, can you put the track back on, or are you working on a new version because of this lyrics issue..???
me, myself, and Pie


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Reply #19 on: June 26, 2016, 21:45:09
@it must be me, Dutchbeat? Haha sorry I put it back ! Should be working now :)


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Reply #20 on: June 28, 2016, 11:17:24
Hey @Alann agree with the feedback - lovely story, gorgeous song and like @Mitzi the rap pleasantly surprised me..

Great job.. very enjoyable listen.



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Reply #21 on: June 29, 2016, 13:50:57
Thank you @Zedd ! :) Happy you liked it :)


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Reply #22 on: July 08, 2016, 22:20:06
Hi Alann,

another very nice one from you. I am not a fan of rap so I like the other parts more but it fits somehow...

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Reply #23 on: July 09, 2016, 15:56:01
Hello Alann, very good voice and beautiful guitar sound there. Like the song a lot although the rap part is not my cup of tea. Only thing I would work on is the accent on the words. Some of them are hard to understand without reading the lyrics.
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Reply #24 on: July 09, 2016, 16:38:53
Hi @Alann , this is a great track, a very crisp and clear recording with a beautiful vocal!!!
and when the beats come in with the backing vocals...super

great this, I put a like on this track on your Soundcloud  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

I agree with @fischermans, that I also was wondering whether the rap parts were needed
I think the song could do without it, but never mind that, you have made a super song, I think the chorus is fantastic and very hooky and catchy!!!!!


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Reply #25 on: July 10, 2016, 14:27:57
Thank you @it must be me, Dutchbeat? @junemay @fischermans.
I think I may make some final changes when I'll be able to master it, someday!

Thanks a lot and glad you enjoyed it
Cheers
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