• - Tale's left with no end - 19thFeb2016
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- Tale's left with no end - 19thFeb2016
on: February 20, 2016, 00:56:48
Song I done with my evening.

https://soundcloud.com/moles-1/tales-left-with-no-end

- Tale's left with no end -

Theres so much more to be told, so much left still to unfold,
many tales left with no end, many people who'll be friends,
so much more left to go, so much more left to know,

I think that many years from now,
I'll look back and remember how,
there were so many thrills,
times were good but are they still ?
will we still be in this place,
will we still have dreams to chase,

Sometimes I like to reminisce,
theres something that I love in this,
sometimes I like to predict,
although theres no point in this,
Iike to live in the now, sometimes I do forget how,
I try not to think so much,
it is how I stay in touch with me.

https://soundcloud.com/moles-1/tales-left-with-no-end


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Re: - Tale's left with no end - 19thFeb2016
Reply #1 on: February 21, 2016, 17:04:09
Hi Moledog, again a nice tune, with a great sounding bass

it sounds good to me, but the vocal melody may need some more variation, but your vocals together create a very nice atmosphere

man, you really have a high production!!!




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Re: - Tale's left with no end - 19thFeb2016
Reply #2 on: February 22, 2016, 00:42:55
Hey Glasgow!

Wow I agree with DB, you're very productive!
Yes the melody is a bit monotonous imo, but for me that has it's charm in this song.
I believe you're expressing some fairy tail kind of sounds in the instrumental parts,
is that right? I had some trouble linking the melodies (and vocal parts), but that
says more about me than you.
I enjoyed the listen, and keep up the passion that's driving you to produce that much
work!

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Re: - Tale's left with no end - 19thFeb2016
Reply #3 on: February 22, 2016, 10:54:28
I kind of like songs that veer off in directions you don't expect them to go.  That's how I felt with the guitar solo part in the middle.  I also like the quirky sound you generate on this song. 

My only issue is there are parts where the timing of the instruments are a little off rhythm. 



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