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a song about trying to stop smoking..again!
on: January 18, 2015, 19:12:02
i guess, a tribute to the nicotine devil

once again.....

this where i am....

https://soundcloud.com/dutchbeat-1/its-in-your-head-that-cigarette
me, myself, and Pie


Re: a song about trying to stop smoking..again!
Reply #1 on: January 18, 2015, 21:15:58
Ah the demon nicotine - don't envy you that challenge DB.. not easy.. Is writing about it making it easier?? And tell me is the mind over matter thing working for you?

I'm assuming it's Mrs DB as your co-vocalist? Have you made her into the Nicotine temptress??  :) :)

I love the hypnotic feel to this.. and your rocky backing vocals at the beginning.. the whole mood is very fitting to the subject matter..

I did find some of the lyrics hard to make out at the beginning of the chorus - would like to see the lyrics for that....

Very good and clever song... as a former smoker, I totally get it - fab!

Z


Re: a song about trying to stop smoking..again!
Reply #2 on: January 18, 2015, 22:34:40
Hey DB!

You're having fun with your nexus, allright :D
But yes, very hypnotic and addictive, so fits the subject perfectly.
Sending you all my non-smoking vibes!

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Re: a song about trying to stop smoking..again!
Reply #3 on: January 18, 2015, 23:49:29
Cool track!
I like that 'voices in my head' thing that's going on... that inner monologue between you and temptation - at least that's how I interpret it.
Would like to read the lyrics as well, I agree they're a bit hard to understand in the beginning of the chorus.

Speaking of which: I love the chorus! The pads and the vocal duet are working so well together.
Really catchy!

Well, good luck quitting - you can do it!  :)



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