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Offline shatiks

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Марево (Mirage) New song
« on: July 11, 2018, 13:56:35 »
I started working on my first solo album. Already even mounted the video )

Десь в минулім житті
Рахували зірки разом ми
І не думали що
Можем стати як сон
Маревом
Та пройшло сім століть
Я тебе знов зустрів раптом
Посміхнулася ти
І сховалась у тінь
Маревом

Приспів

Та це було тільки марево
Знали б ми що все мине
Свою любов не впізнали ми
Знали б ми все наперед
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Скрізь часи і віки
Ми шукаємо те марево
Віднайдемо чи ні
Та цього вже не взнаємо
Десь в минулім житті
Рахували зірки разом ми
І не думали що
Станем забутим сном
Маревом

Приспів

Та це було тільки марево
Знали б ми що все мине
Свою любов не впізнали ми
Знали б ми все наперед


Shatiks

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #1 on: July 11, 2018, 20:37:38 »
With my very very limited knowledge of your language, it canít understand much of your lyrics.
Never mind, I listen to Arabic things as wel.

And if the feel of the music grabs me, I am won over.

Great songs you make and I wish you a lot of pride and success with your album.

And to prove what I say, please have a look/listen here:

https://soundcloud.com/user-970238121-184953199/sets/summer-sounds-2018

You are sooooooooooo good!
Kind regards, Gus

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #2 on: July 12, 2018, 10:42:01 »
I tried to translate - something about that)
 
Somewhere in a past life
We counted stars together
And we did not know that
We can become like a dream
By haze

And seven centuries have passed
Once I  met you again
you smiled
And hided in the shade
 By haze

chorus

But it was only a mirage
Would we know that everything will pass
We did not recognize our love
If We would know everything in advance

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Through times and ages
We are looking for that haze
Get it or not
We do not know this anymore

Somewhere in a past life
We counted stars together
And we did not know that
We can become like a dream
By haze


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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #3 on: July 12, 2018, 12:42:14 »
дуже хороший
Gus

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #4 on: July 12, 2018, 14:19:27 »
 LePlongeur Дуже дякую )

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #5 on: July 15, 2018, 19:36:13 »
Fellow kitcheners
Please take the time to listen to this one too.
Yes, a fan, so Will you be if you listen to this one.
Kind regards, Gus

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #6 on: July 18, 2018, 04:56:45 »
Hey @shatiks this is beautiful!

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Somewhere in a past life
We counted stars together
And we did not know that
We can become like a dream
By haze

This concept truly comes out in the music and the video. It is very powerful and somewhat magical!

11 ::Note::
Bill
Songwriter, Keyboards, Arranger, Producer & Engineer for November Sound

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #7 on: July 18, 2018, 05:07:14 »
@shatiks - This is an excellent song - very moving and beautiful. The instruments are perfectly suited and support the melody very well. This looks like a finished work - great video by the way too - so if you still want some suggestions, please let me know.

- Ed

Offline Bill from November Sound

Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #8 on: July 18, 2018, 05:28:36 »
btw - @shatiks  Do you have a Twitter?

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #9 on: July 18, 2018, 09:24:30 »
Thank you friends for feedback! I do not have Twitter. I have this     https://www.facebook.com/Shatunski/

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #10 on: July 18, 2018, 19:56:48 »
A great bit of work @shatiks and I love how you are adding a  visual element to your music again.
Looking at how you arrange videos I can see how you might see song ideas in your head as pictures.

I know it's something I do, if I can picture something , I can then hear something if that makes sense when creating.

Good Work and good look with your other songs :-)

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #11 on: July 19, 2018, 00:11:27 »
@shatiks  very much enjoyed - reminded me of Serge Gainsbourg , the subdued way of singing. Thumbs up!. Good luck with the album.
recommending https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/How_Music_Works "How music works", book by David Byrne.

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Re: Марево (Mirage) New song
« Reply #12 on: July 19, 2018, 19:57:02 »
Very nice feel and vibe of this song, and I really like your voice!

Reidmoto


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