• Ти і я (You and me) New Song
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Ти і я (You and me) New Song
on: September 21, 2018, 20:02:42
Hi! For a long time I did not appear here. Worked on mastering and recording the album. New microphone and new plug-ins . I want to present you one of the tracks.
https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/ti-ya
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Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #1 on: September 21, 2018, 21:48:35
This really sounds good. Vocals are smooth and wonderfully placed in the mix and.

Whichever new microphone you chose......you chose well.

Seriously enjoyable listen even though the ending felt a little abrupt. Thanks for posting it.
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Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #2 on: September 22, 2018, 14:58:42
I love this @shatiks ! You have a melodic approach and a kind of musical phrasing that these American ears don't hear very often..... and I love it so much!
Your vocals have improved so much in my opinion. The musical production overall sounds very good. It has a sophisticated fullness and shine.

I'm not sure if it is just the upload to SoundCloud that is causing this but there a few little "blips" when playing it especially around 3 minutes in. I'm also getting a bit of a buzz in my right earbud. If you're still working on it then maybe you can check this. If not, then keep it going.

Good show!
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November Sound is based on the Mother, Father & Son musical trio of Melissa, Bill & Will. I'm the father so anything I post will have my wife singing and/or my son playing percussion.


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Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #3 on: September 22, 2018, 17:31:48
@Leonard Scaper, @Bill from November Sound
Thank you friends for the feedback and tips. Compare the original with the file in soundcloud. There's really a tail from the reverberation that produces an unpleasant sound. In an uncompressed file, this is not so noticeable. Thank you for noticing. I will try to reduce the effect.
I have to admit that I do not have any studio monitors yet, and I can not hear such nuances in the process of mastering. And in the headphones, everything sounds like normal. And, of course, I'm still studying music production.  I really do not have enough friendly advice from the pros. Since all my friends are not musicians.


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Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #4 on: September 22, 2018, 23:45:43
I like the feel of this and the guitar and vocals seem to sit correctly. A quite intimate sound that is ideal for a ballad.

I must admit the solo from 1:35 until 2:07 and again later on does nothing to move the song on in my opinion.
It sounds a bit dull or flat, I wonder if it would sound better played in a higher octave but I think you could be more adventurous
in your choice to be honest.

A nice song but having heard your other work in the past you could polish this to be even better.

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Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #5 on: September 26, 2018, 11:53:00
Love the song!
And your English is improving!
A demo can have some rough edges; if it is meant as a definitive recording, I would agree with @MrBouzouki .
Great job @shatiks, glad you’re back.
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Ти і я (You and me) New Song
Reply #6 on: September 28, 2018, 17:08:57
 ::heart:: :loveit:
Jeete



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