• У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
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У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
on: November 19, 2017, 10:49:44
Slightly changed the structure of the song and added new batches
https://soundcloud.com/shat-iks/u-vkna

Little child in the window
Sits all day
Waiting for father from war
his songs
Months and years pass
He is not there
The child looks distant
In the eyes of the tear

chorus

And in the rain, the father will return from the war
He will take the child to his arms
And out of misfortune will cover his cloak
There will be no more separation
Gun down, damned enemy falls
The region will blossom in white
And in a voice like before
Children will laugh

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Mom changed, no longer that one
why sad
It's been said for a long time from my father
News No
Summer and winter pass
But he is silent
And only the rain is outside the window
falls down


chorus

And in the rain, the father will return from the war
He will take the child to his arms
And out of misfortune will cover his cloak
There will be no more separation
Gun down, damned enemy falls
The region will blossom in white
And in a voice like before
Children will laugh



little child
Sits at the window
Waiting for dad
And there's no dad
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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #1 on: November 19, 2017, 11:01:33
@shatiks  - I'm just listening to this now and it has a great vibe.
It's sounding very accomplished and I like how it grows musically.
A nice piece of work this.

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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #2 on: November 19, 2017, 11:15:22
OK that was a nice bit of work @shatiks - there seems real emotion in the song that comes across despite the language barrier.
I like how you develop the song subtly without ever losing the groove. I think you layer the various instruments well and everything seems there for a reason.

My wife has just listened to this too and she thought your vocals has an 'innocent quality to them' that reflects and conjures up a child's take on the world.

Yes a very good job

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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #3 on: November 19, 2017, 14:59:52
Nice job @shatiks ! You did a great job with the vocal processing and doubled vocals on this one. They stand out as full, somber, pensive and innocent. Great use of the stereo image with the vocals ....actually the whole arrangement.

The song is very enjoyable to listen to with a wonderful flow. Being that I can only read your English translation I will say that the music doesn't sound to me as sad as the lyrics do. I can listen to this over and over but if it were in English I think it would make me too sad.

Great work!
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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #4 on: November 19, 2017, 15:05:40
Very atmospheric - and nice production.
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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #5 on: November 19, 2017, 15:20:52
Thank you guys for the feedback!
 This work for me is perhaps too emotional. Every day in the news in my country they report about the victims of the war with Russia. Every day someone's child is losing his father. This is happening today, in modern Europe. Someone calls it Terrorism. But for me it's an ordinary war. War with savage eastern barbarians for the right to live in freedom...


Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #6 on: November 20, 2017, 00:21:50
Good that you wrote about this......music...helps.

This song is excellent. Vocals sound great and the whole piece really exudes emotion,
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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #7 on: November 20, 2017, 01:58:19
You are wonderful
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Re: У вікна (At the window ) fresh version
Reply #8 on: November 20, 2017, 03:28:55
The production, instrumentation and vocals all work together to convey the emotion of the lyrics. I like the way that the chorus is layered with that atmospheric pad and the doubled vocals. Nice work!



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