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♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
on: June 08, 2014, 14:46:49
Here a new song hope you like.

https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/jay-jay

65 Jay Jay Kapo 2 April 2014

Verse 1
She lost her mom and dad
at the age of five
she walked on a tightrope
the rest of her life

Verse 2
When she got older
she still felt alone
her days were to dark to live
her nights to dark to die

Chorus
Her name was Jay Jay
not kissed by the sun
never be loved
loved from no one

Verse 3
She died on a Friday night
alone in the dark
her eyes were open wide
only the moon shined bright
only the moon shined bright
only the moon shined bright

Chorus
Her name was Jay Jay
not kissed by the sun
never be loved
loved from no one
never be loved
loved from no one
from no one
from no one

? Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans?


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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #1 on: June 08, 2014, 16:27:06
Ha Fisch, what do i think???

i think you did it again, excellent song, the chords and singing melody, and how it develops, fit each other like a glove
this song, your number 65, in my opinion completely has that characteristic Fischermans trade mark all over

well it works for me

i may have heard this one before from you, perhaps..., but if not, it must be that is sounds and flows so naturally!!!!!

an extra karma point for you!!!!
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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #2 on: June 08, 2014, 20:09:24
Loved that fish -

Some really clever lines to be appreciated in there

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her days were to dark to live
her nights to dark to die

that line really resonates - wonderful stuff.

I also think this is the strongest chorus I have heard from you - realy nice writing in this one.

The kitchen is really starting to come to the boil lately!!

Keep up the good work.


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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #3 on: June 10, 2014, 06:29:32
Hey dutch and onemanband. Thanks for the nice comments.They always helps to go on. :D
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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #4 on: June 12, 2014, 19:12:19

 Hey Fish ;D

 Excellent song mate ;D ;D

 Really nice guitar playing.....great chords.   Amazing sound and feel you've created there Fish ;D ;D

 The vocals were your usual 'brilliance'.....loved the passion in the performance ;D ;D

 One of your best..... I think ;D



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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #5 on: June 12, 2014, 19:24:04
Hi Alexander,

Slightly darker sound - like it. Nice melodies and lovely playing.
Vocal was back to your best.
I liked the subject matter.
If anything it was too short.

Cheers,


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Re: ♪ New song Jay Jay ♪
Reply #6 on: June 12, 2014, 21:50:04
@Bin
Thank you mate.Love comments like this. ;D ;D
@Digger
Thanks mate means a lot.
BTW good you be in our Team and nice color of your name. ;)



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