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♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
on: February 08, 2015, 18:49:56
« Last Edit: February 16, 2015, 23:02:58 by fischermans »
Here the promised proper version of my new song.

https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/waters-of-forgetfulness-160215-2256

Waters of forgetfulness   Kapo 0   Febuar 2015

Verse 1
All your memories are gone
wind has blown them away
one night to forget the pain
one night with gently rain

Chorus
Some signs of regret
tears make faces wet
another day will reach you soon
it's time to say goodbuy to the moon

Verse 2
Feeling the pain will never end
even if you hide in a wonderland
no chance to escape no way
heroes not get born every day

Chorus
Some signs of regret
tears make faces wet
another day will reach you soon
it's time to say goodbuy to the moon

Verse 3
Lost and alone in the outer space
alone for the rest of your race
waters of forgetfulness lurk beyond the wall
kill your dreams softly they never get tall

Chorus
Some signs of regret
tears make faces wet
another day will reach you soon
it's time to say goodbuy to the moon

? Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ?


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #1 on: February 08, 2015, 20:19:02
Hi Fisch,

Love the title; very "proggy."

Guitar sounds lovely and warm. I like the choice of chords - fits the mood of the lyrics totally.
Vocal was guaranteed to be top notch and doesn't disappoint. Sounds great when the second vocal comes in.

Sounds great as is, but i think it would work as a full on prog rock song - building up with extended guitar solos, etc, then dropping back to the simple acoustic guitar.

Good stuff.

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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #2 on: February 08, 2015, 22:20:42
Always such feeling in your songs Fisch. They never disappoint. This is a super good chord progression in the chorus, sounds like the sort of thing that you easily write dozens of different melodies to, very nice.

As Digger said, great full sound on your guitar. Karma given.

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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #3 on: February 08, 2015, 23:12:44
very excellent
indeed  8) ;D ;D

incoming Karma!!!
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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #4 on: February 08, 2015, 23:28:03
Agree it's a cool song title...

Also agree with the others on the chord progressions - I was wondering what chords you were playing from the very start actually!!

Very heart-felt lyrics...

Lovely!

Z


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #5 on: February 13, 2015, 16:01:23
Thanks for your comments they all made my day. ;)
Zedd, if you want I can send you the chords. :)


Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #6 on: February 13, 2015, 17:32:49
Yes please!! :)


Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #7 on: February 21, 2015, 00:09:33
Beautiful!!!
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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #8 on: February 28, 2015, 16:56:35
Nice! In this context i.e. just a guitar I would have preferred a less processed vocal sound but the vocals as such are very good. I find the verses and chorus to be a bit to similar and the guitar part between them really does not lead in to the chorus. On the other hand the similarity make the song flow along nicely...
I would pick up on diggers ideas about a full prod, then variation could be added by the instruments and thereby making the chorus stand out more.
Just my very personal opinion of course..

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My land's only borders lie around my heart


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #9 on: March 04, 2015, 01:26:04
Hey Zedd I just sent the chords  :D


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #10 on: March 04, 2015, 10:04:13
Hi Fisch

is this song available for a remix attempt?

and @ Zedd (off topic), i am getting somwhere with the Rainy Days remix now



Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #11 on: March 04, 2015, 10:34:05
« Last Edit: March 04, 2015, 10:41:36 by Zedd »
D'oh! You're completely right! Thanks a million... Sorry to hear you've been sick... I'll message you!

Great to hear DB - look forward to hearing it!

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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #12 on: March 04, 2015, 15:49:03
Karen you have a PM.
Dutch I?m always open for that. ;D
What do you need?


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #13 on: March 04, 2015, 16:05:03
hi Fisch,

i you can sent the vocal(s) separate from the guitar in mp3 or wav format that would be great

and the chords (names) would also be helpful

i think i have found a further refinement of my procedure to connect non fixed tempo tracks to the betas and sample that i want to test

and this track would be nice to try that, also because the track is very nice anyway!

 


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Re: ♪ Waters of forgetfulness ♪ New song
Reply #14 on: March 05, 2015, 23:13:27
Dutch just send the tracks. ;)



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