• ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
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♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
on: May 10, 2014, 20:05:28
« Last Edit: May 10, 2014, 20:21:27 by fischermans »
Hello to all Kitcheners
Here a new song I manage to record today.Hope you like.
https://soundcloud.com/a-fisch-1/barefoot

Lyrics:
67 Barefoot   Kapo 1    April 2014

Verse 1
Your eyes were so blue
sun shined bright in the sky
our love was true
we thought we could fly

chorus
Fly away
and never come back again
barefoot on the road
which carries our hearts away

Verse 2
we where young
we had a lot of dreams
been always on the run
nothing was like it seemed

Chorus
Fly away ....

Verse 3
You and me
together in perfect harmony
we felt so free
and piped our melody

Chorus
Piped

Your eyes were so blue
sun shined bright in the sky
our love was true
we thought we could......
Fly away
and never come back again
barefoot on the road
which carries our hearts away

? Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ?

Here is a link to the life performance of the first rough Demo


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Re: ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
Reply #1 on: May 10, 2014, 23:06:21
Hi Alex - this is a great song with so much potential  :)

You are a bit like me: great at writing songs and lyrics....but.... nicht gut mit lieferung

I would love you to post an instrumental version of this track, to allow others to really take the vocal and throw it around more.  It 's needs more energy and ooomph.

The bridge is excellent - it really breaks the song  :)

Keep working on this please !



Re: ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
Reply #2 on: May 12, 2014, 01:25:24
Hey Fish,

  I really enjoyed this, I am sure you have been told a million times how idiosyncratice your style is. But I thik it goes beyond the accent, you have a way of phrasing lines that sounds unique.

This video made me jealous that i can't whistle - and that section was a really nice little interlude.

I thought the chorus worked really well with that teased rhyme that comes slightly after expected.. beautiful

I can't think of anything to say by way of criticism, although i will be sure to listen a few more times and let you know if anything springs to mind

Well done and keep up the good work

Good luck.


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Re: ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
Reply #3 on: May 12, 2014, 15:44:05
Hi Alexander,

The video isn't working on my tab, so this is just about the Soundcloud version:

You got a real feel-good song here, I must listen to this again while lying in the sun on the beach!  :D

Not much else to say here... vocals are great, guitar sounds excellent, the chorus is really catchy - that short pause just before the chorus is brilliant!

Love the whistling, but would love to hear a lot more of it, like after the last chorus


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Re: ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
Reply #4 on: May 12, 2014, 19:52:58
ha, this is a new recording, i think of this song, i heard /saw the life recording
i like that a lot, but this sounds better productionwise and the vocal sounds even more "certain"

and it is really a super song!!!!!


and i agree very much, with onemanband saying that: "you have a way of phrasing lines that sounds unique"

this is cool, a little drum shuffle might work on this, but NICE, yes!!!
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Reply #5 on: May 13, 2014, 15:17:24
@jmacdon
Thank you for your words.May I have to do the voice again. ;)
@onemanband
No, no one told me about my idiosyncratice style. ;D ;D ;D
Thank you means a lot to me.
@Michael
Thank you for your words.They motivate me to go on.Thanks.
@dutch
Thank you.I will play this song for you when you visit me hopefully in near future.
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Re: ♬ "Barefoot" new Song ♬
Reply #6 on: May 13, 2014, 17:21:11
ha, that is nice! watch out Fisch, i might start to sing along  ;D ;D ;D ;D


it is a song i would like to try to add some (very sutil!!!! i promise) little things, some very tasteful drums...

i am serious...but i can understand if you don't want me to try considering my earlier attempts......

but if you would let me, you know the address



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