• ♬ LAST BUT NOT LEAST Ardennen Trilogie Part 3 "NEVER BE SURE"
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 ::Fisch:: Here the third song I made in the Ardennen at our meeting. ::Fisch::

Ardennen Trilogie Nr Three

https://soundcloud.com/fischermans100/ardennen-trilogie-3-090416-0026

"Never be sure"

Strophe 1
There was a day in your life
You felt you canít survive
There where clouds in the sky
May you tried flying too high
Tightened by the sky

Refrain
We will never be aware
If it is enough what we dare
we will never be sure
To find the cure
To heal the world

Strophe 2
At some points in your life
You donít know if youíll ever arrive
You donít know where to go
You donít know which way to flow
Like every river does

Refrain
We will never be aware
If it is enough what we dare
we will never be sure
To find the cure
To heal the world

Strophe 3
Donít be too shy
Unknown things are there to try
But be careful my sun
Not everything is worth for a run
Is worth to be done

Refrain
We will never be aware
If it is enough what we dare
we will never be sure
To find the cure
To heal the world

Strophe 4
whisteling

Refrain
We will never be aware
If it is enough what we dare
we will never be sure
To find the cure
To heal the world

© Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ><(((į> ©


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Hey Fisch,

Another beautiful song penned by you! Great playing and singing. What I don't like is the effect you put on your vocals in the choruses. To me that's only irritating and nothing else, sorry. Also not quite sure about the whistling. I like the idea, but it feels a bit exerted.

Good lyrics, too. But are you really singing this to your sun...?  ;D

Sorry, don't mean to come across as a nagger, because I really like it all in all! :)

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nice song and lyrics!!!
beautiful lines and melody pieces in this

but i agree with Mark on the effect on the chorus being too much

this could have a fuller arrangment musicwise, and the vocals loud (without the effects)

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Hey Alexander!

Firstly, lovely song - the chorus has a lovely phrasing to it - afraid I agree though on the vocal effect... It would be better without and it doesn't need it! It stands on its own..

You're quite the accomplished whistler aren't you??? I couldn't do that in a fit as we say over here, eh meaning, I can't whistle like that :) !

Lovely! What a productive weekend that was for you! Great song, great lyrics - and even better if you amend the vocal effect...




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« Last Edit: April 08, 2016, 23:41:13 by fischermans »
OK it takes 3 days to get the first comment on this song.I better delete it because it must be a very bad one.
@Mark Nagger
Hope you wouldn't say that my mixing skills are modest. I invest several minutes of my valuable songwriting time to mix this song and it is perfect isn't it?   ;D ::Bones:: ;D ::Bones:: ;D
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Are you sure you listened to my song? ;D ;D
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Thank you very much for the first friendly words on this song. :-*
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Oh dear, @it must be me, Dutchbeat?, I guess we're not on top of Alexander's popularity list anymore... :(


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Oh dear, @it must be me, Dutchbeat?, I guess we're not on top of Alexander's popularity list anymore... :(
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D No you aren't.  ;D ;D


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but i stil am.... ??? ??? ???

right  ;D ;D ;D ;D


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where'd the song go?


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but i stil am.... ??? ??? ???

right  ;D ;D ;D ;D
No, for one day from now on you are only a Karma Gangster for me. No grace for you.


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Oh, come on @fischermans, dont act like a prima donna. Bring it back on. (After removing that effect...)  :-* ;D :-*


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After I got under massiv pressure from two well known gangsters I worked several hours on the track to remove the affect on the vocals and after I post the new version.  ::Fisch::


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Ha this a Beautiful song, very good vocal performance (and mix)
lovely

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Hey Fisch,

This is a really beautiful song. The chord progression is very emotive and your vocals act as a real good counterpoint to them.

And as Karen says, thats some nice whistling.

I'm glad you put it back - what a waste if you had it hidden away!

Karma to you for bringing it back

cheers

Jurgen


In my mind a nice simple folk song with a vocal delivery to match.  Well done



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