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♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
on: December 11, 2015, 22:43:51
https://soundcloud.com/fischermans100/swimming-in-darkness-101215-0806

Swimming in darkness

Strophe 1
It doesn?t matter if you right or wrong
Only your mind has to be strong
It doesn?t matter if you?re black or white
Cause we are sisters and brothers with no color inside
Time get stolen often you can?t see
She?s running empty for you and for me

Refrain
You are the reason for me to drive home
Every day without you I feel alone
You are the reason for me to go on
To find the truth where my dreams belong
You and me together for all time
Our love will never decline
I?m in your hands
You?re in mine

Strophe 2
When we where young we felt so free
When we get older we need shade of a tree
Life is dangerous sometimes it?s hard
We need to hold each other not to fall apart
Swimming in darkness in a sea of love
We are like the stars shining bright from above.

Refrain
You are the reason for me to drive home
Every day without you I feel alone
You are the reason for me to go on
To find the truth where my dreams belong
You and me together for all time
Our love will never decline
I?m in your hands
You?re in mine

? Voice, Words and Music Alexander Fisch aka fischermans ><(((?> ?


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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #1 on: December 12, 2015, 01:29:38
Hi Alexander, sounds like a personal love song to me, sweet lyrics...
Well played guitar parts. And of course sung in your own signature Fischerman's
style. Well done, thanks for sharing!
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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #2 on: December 12, 2015, 09:29:20
Thank you Marti. :D


Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #3 on: December 12, 2015, 13:14:17
Hi Fisch,

I enjoyed reading your lyrics and listening to your song. I really like the way this piece is written. You tend to have a number of very effective/well put verses in your lyrics which are such a pleasure to read/listen to :) I also like your choice for the title. Thanks for sharing! :) Karma for you :)
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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #4 on: December 12, 2015, 14:53:31
Ha Fisch, Beautiful! I can only listen on little laptop speakers at the moment, but it osunds beautiful!!!

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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #5 on: December 13, 2015, 13:20:20
Really beautiful Fisch :)  Lovely lyrics and I like the way you finger-pick the verses :) I'd like to hear some BV's in the chorus...I'm a sucker for harmonies ;)

Your vocals are as powerful as ever, as is the guitar playing :) Karma from me  :)


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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #6 on: December 13, 2015, 15:26:29
ha, now i can listen with proper sound... ;D ;D ;D ;D, :P :P :P

listening to the Fischer.....great songwriting

great guitar playing and vocal that is, but i have mixing tips on this.... ;D ;D ;D, to begin with  ;D ;D ;D the midrange and low guitar sounds a too much to the left (panwise)
could be spread out more and can sound even nicer...drop of reverb...and a more overall stereowise  (the guitar)...but what a absolutely cool song

and as Crystal says, backing vocals, that would be awesome to this

what a pleasure to listen to your songwriting
everytime


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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #7 on: December 13, 2015, 17:39:24
« Last Edit: December 15, 2015, 07:17:28 by fischermans »
@Rachel
Thank you so much.I always do my best. ;D ;D
@Suzy
Thank you Suzy. :-*
@Dutch
There is no need to give some mixing tips to an ignorant like me. ;D I always wait to find a friendly fellow to do the mix for me. ;D ;D ;D ;D
Look, for me mixing is a different job.I'm going for finding a melody, finding harmonies and improve guitar playing and singing.Recording and mixing is more stress than fun. ;)
Thank you dutch. ;)


Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #8 on: January 03, 2016, 08:29:26
Wauwww beautiful!!!
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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #9 on: January 04, 2016, 15:22:24
Fischermans,

Beautiful track with a strong meaning behind it.

I thoroughly enjoyed listening and and that was only through my rubbish laptop speakers... will try listen again later on a better set up.

Great stuff!


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Re: ♬ Swimming in darkness ♬ new song
Reply #10 on: January 04, 2016, 22:38:34
Wauwww beautiful!!!
Thank you Goat  :-*

Fischermans,

Beautiful track with a strong meaning behind it.

I thoroughly enjoyed listening and and that was only through my rubbish laptop speakers... will try listen again later on a better set up.

Great stuff!
Thank you very much PTCruiser and hopefully you still like the track after a proper listen.



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