• Another new tune
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Another new tune
on: August 01, 2018, 10:58:21
Hello my fellow songwriters!

Just curious what you wonderful ppl wud think of this new track I just posted.

https://soundcloud.com/thegainsexperiment/untitled

Any feedback would be great

Cheers!!

Kyle


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Re: Another new tune
Reply #1 on: August 01, 2018, 14:33:59
Well.....I like it. The way you did your vocals gives a it a kind of distant, "letting it all go" feel. I'm not a big fan of repetitious vulgarity in a song, but this whole thing is like some psychedelic vulgar lament and you definitely get that feeling across.

I really like how the song winds completely down to a stop before that very different ending.
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Re: Another new tune
Reply #2 on: August 01, 2018, 14:55:11
lol I should of put a explicit content warning

I appreciate you listening tho, and that's why I didn't originally post it.
Thought it was to vulgar aswell, but I thought why the hell not post it right?

Thanks man

Kyle



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