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Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
on: September 26, 2020, 11:54:03
« Last Edit: September 26, 2020, 12:31:30 by Mo »
Folks, it's done!

I could tell a lot about the way but I just want resume: I never before struggeld with so much difficilties when tried to put a song idea dowm. Finally i crashed my master file and this primitive version, production wise is what's left. But I'm relieved somehow... I feel it just would went more worse if i try to work more on it.

A big THANKS  again to you  @Bill from November Sound and @Vince for helping me kindley getting the lyric  started here in a better flow!  You're awesome! ::heart::


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Anway

She's ten years three quaters,
a sweet face with silky blond hair
Her eyes shines like ice water -
 Unique girl no one can compare
Longs home pretty much
to get like her young brother
some hugs or just a gentle touch
 from her beloved mother

Mama, I want stay
I do love you
Please hug me anyway

Her uncontrolled her anger and grief,
does the mother scare
They came to her at night like a thief
that away tooks her
Passed through some homes of kids
coz disgusts everybody
Even schools, fourth or fifth
hard she beat her classmates bloody

Mama, I want stay
I do love you
Please hug me anyway

Too coward the single mother
Facilities of childcare fail
Freaking girl must no more bother
More sedatives willdo her pale
Also she's too young for prison
but must away best far
Youth camp is the next descision
 rehomes her in south Africa

Mama, I want stay
I do love you
Please hug me anyway


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Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #1 on: September 26, 2020, 16:28:31
 :thumbsup: :thumbsup: @Mo, sounds good to me ::headphone::
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Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #2 on: September 26, 2020, 20:59:59
I'm totally happy if you like it @Dutchbeat, thank you for listening! :)


Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #3 on: September 26, 2020, 23:27:07
Heartfelt lyrics and delivery... I especially like the guitar and arrangement.

So sorry you lost the file you worked so hard on... it happens... we move on when we’ve done all we can do.

This type of song and arrangement, mood and spirit...suits you well... @Mo ... looking forward to more like this.



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Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #4 on: September 27, 2020, 08:56:13
Yes, a niche all your own.
Great work @Mo !!!
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Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #5 on: September 27, 2020, 10:21:13
« Last Edit: September 27, 2020, 10:25:49 by Mo »
.. we move on when we’ve done all we can do.

Exactly @1roomstudio :)
I like it very much if you narrow a bit from your own experience, it's a kind of orientation to me.
Myself don't like the guitars here very much... i know my limits... i just do it because i don't have another choice.

Btw when we will hear something of your work again? :D And how is your friend @Kolohe  doing? Somehow  I miss him here  in the kitchen.
Anyway, thank you very much for your time to take a listen and comment! :ok:


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Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #6 on: September 27, 2020, 10:23:57
@LePlongeur  you know that your praise does me proud!

Yes, a niche all your own.

Maybe, but for the price of a very lonely way, I wonder why this feels  just so damn familar.


Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #7 on: September 27, 2020, 14:41:40
Hola @Mo

What a sad, terrible song ... How many times does this happen ...

Getting out of the sensations it has caused me, I will stick to commenting on the song as a musical work.
Very interesting, dark, moving and disturbing not only because of the lyrics but because of your vivid interpretation
You say that it has cost you a lot of work to get a fruit of your idea, I think it is normal, the situation in the world tightens us more than we think, at least I think so, it has happened to me lately too, everything is disjointed, don't worry , you are already entering your new skin ...
A very big kiss for you and your dreams

Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
https://vimeo.com/onacarom


Re: Anyway - former 'System cracker' lyrics
Reply #8 on: September 28, 2020, 04:34:34
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Btw when we will hear something of your work again? :D And how is your friend @Kolohe  doing? Somehow  I miss him here  in the kitchen.

Something new posted tonight... since you asked @Mo

Hopefully @Kolohe will see your mention and mine ...I miss him too...  he always turns up! 😎



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