• Arrow of Time (Stan Major lyrics)
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Re: Arrow of Time (Stan Major lyrics)
Reply #15 on: April 30, 2019, 14:05:25
Wow! Wonderful collaboration @oorlab and @smajor
the melody fits perfectly with so important lyrics. Great job.  ::thumb::
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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Re: Arrow of Time (Stan Major lyrics)
Reply #16 on: May 02, 2019, 20:49:35
All in their places. The song is completely ready and does not need anything. Great job!  ::thumb::
Shatiks


Re: Arrow of Time (Stan Major lyrics)
Reply #17 on: May 06, 2019, 00:11:19
Hi @oorlab

You have built a beautiful song on a poetic as well as abstract lyrics. I have enjoyed both,

-the lyrics describing so many emotions of overwhelming discovery through that time that advances and recedes and
-the melody in your voice.

I love when you sing "'I'm living within an illusion of the senses
observing the flight of the arrow of time

I do not know what I can tell you that they have not told you @DonMar and @Pleudoniem; they are right, with their criteria, but you are also right, you and the letter, so when everyone is right ... What to do?
hahaha

I would simply clarify the voice a little more to make it more defined, it's a matter of equalization, keep in mind that the violin sounds on the right and monopolizes a lot of attention. (At least in my headphones)

But after all this verbiage of mine I can only repeat that I LOVED the song.  ::thumb:: ::thumb::



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