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Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
on: September 28, 2017, 22:05:19
https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/z-mnoyu-bud
I continue to work on vocals and sound engineering, and I must admit this is more difficult than writing the song itself )
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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #1 on: October 01, 2017, 00:47:52
I think this is FAB!  Kudos.  Very catchy tune, and the mix sounds great too.  If it were mine, I might really kick the drums in more at some point, and/or have a break-type section that provided something significantly different, yet still cool, that would connect back up.  But, I still think it's terrific as is, and I don't need to understand a word.  :)


Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #2 on: October 01, 2017, 01:23:17
Yes.....I just got a chance to listen and I agree with @HoboSage .

I look for your material. This is a good one.
"The main thing is to have a gutsy approach....but use your head." Julia Child

 "In a world of robotic conformity, the only originality left in music is the imperfections" Eric Craptone

"Special thanks to Steve Gleason for making me who I am today." Leonard Scaper

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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #3 on: October 01, 2017, 13:00:04
This is another catchy tune and I always find your voice relaxing. It sounds a story-telling voice.
Musically I like the choice of sounds and I think you have a good feel for placement of instruments in your mix.
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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #4 on: October 01, 2017, 16:53:10
 ::heart:: ::heart:: ::heart:: Sounds like a fairytale, love the melodies, soft and sweet
Merry Christmas


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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #5 on: October 01, 2017, 20:24:01
thank you very much for useful advices - to all ) ::Note::


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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #6 on: January 23, 2018, 15:50:57
Final version (for today))))
https://soundcloud.com/shat-iks/tlki-mene-lyubi


Empty room
Without you is my love again
Spoiled holiday
I'll get some firewood
I will burn a fire
An old fireplace, the best friend
It's like a spell
What surrounded us around

Chorus

Just love me
Only hear me
That it was not in life
Do not let go
be alone with me anyway
Hold me tight
In joy or sorrow
Do not leave

2
Laugh bad weather
The snow is thrown into the windows
Ghostly freedom
Now lies at your feet
You wanted that
To soar in the sky like a bird
I left
Minutes of happiness in my dreams

Chorus

3
Empty room
Without you, forgive love
Sent by grate
I believe and hope again
I will burn a fire
An old fireplace, the best friend
It's like a spell
What surrounded us around

Chorus


Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #7 on: January 24, 2018, 13:51:34
Really like that.  Love that swirling guitar effect that comes it at just the right time!  You have a new follower!


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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #8 on: January 24, 2018, 19:14:04
@DavidHutton
Thanks for becoming my follower! I will try not to disappoint you in the future!)


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Re: Be with me (Зі мною будь) New
Reply #9 on: January 24, 2018, 21:06:07
« Last Edit: January 24, 2018, 21:25:32 by LePlongeur »
I love it like crazy.
Thereís one but......, maybe the fuzz guitar is les abrupt on and off if itís less loud. Then it blends more with the rest of th backing.

I donít Know how to follow you, but Iíll figure that One out in due time.
The capitals (K, O etc) are a present from the Apple Mafia.
Donít worry about that.
Donít worry about nothing.
This, including the moody picture on sound cloud, is terrific.

And youíre doing great with your translating thingy.
I already look forward to  your next one.
Kind regards, Gus



Edit

I may have been listening to the 1st recording. If youíve lowered the fuzz guitar somewhat, please ignore my remark.........



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