Be with me (Зі мною будь) New

https://soundcloud.com/yuriy-shatunski/z-mnoyu-bud
I continue to work on vocals and sound engineering, and I must admit this is more difficult than writing the song itself )

I think this is FAB!  Kudos.  Very catchy tune, and the mix sounds great too.  If it were mine, I might really kick the drums in more at some point, and/or have a break-type section that provided something significantly different, yet still cool, that would connect back up.  But, I still think it's terrific as is, and I don't need to understand a word. 

Yes.....I just got a chance to listen and I agree with @HoboSage .

I look for your material. This is a good one.

This is another catchy tune and I always find your voice relaxing. It sounds a story-telling voice.
Musically I like the choice of sounds and I think you have a good feel for placement of instruments in your mix.

  Sounds like a fairytale, love the melodies, soft and sweet

thank you very much for useful advices - to all )

Final version (for today))))
https://soundcloud.com/shat-iks/tlki-mene-lyubi


Empty room
Without you is my love again
Spoiled holiday
I'll get some firewood
I will burn a fire
An old fireplace, the best friend
It's like a spell
What surrounded us around

Chorus

Just love me
Only hear me
That it was not in life
Do not let go
be alone with me anyway
Hold me tight
In joy or sorrow
Do not leave

2
Laugh bad weather
The snow is thrown into the windows
Ghostly freedom
Now lies at your feet
You wanted that
To soar in the sky like a bird
I left
Minutes of happiness in my dreams

Chorus

3
Empty room
Without you, forgive love
Sent by grate
I believe and hope again
I will burn a fire
An old fireplace, the best friend
It's like a spell
What surrounded us around

Chorus

Really like that.  Love that swirling guitar effect that comes it at just the right time!  You have a new follower!

@DavidHutton
Thanks for becoming my follower! I will try not to disappoint you in the future!)

I love it like crazy.
There’s one but......, maybe the fuzz guitar is les abrupt on and off if it’s less loud. Then it blends more with the rest of th backing.

I don’t Know how to follow you, but I’ll figure that One out in due time.
The capitals (K, O etc) are a present from the Apple Mafia.
Don’t worry about that.
Don’t worry about nothing.
This, including the moody picture on sound cloud, is terrific.

And you’re doing great with your translating thingy.
I already look forward to  your next one.
Kind regards, Gus



Edit

I may have been listening to the 1st recording. If you’ve lowered the fuzz guitar somewhat, please ignore my remark.........