• Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
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Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
on: October 08, 2020, 16:59:03
« Last Edit: October 09, 2020, 17:01:01 by aureliobiz »
Hello, my first post here. This song is the most recent of mine, all recorded by me and Band in a Box. Portuguese lyrics though, I'm brazilian. Any feedback is appreciated. Thanks songwriters!

https://soundcloud.com/aureliobiz/11-bolhas-de-sabao

Bolhas de Sabao

Antes de você aparecer                                                                                                     
eu estava tão só                                                                                                                 
continuo tão só
até o momento em que eu escrevo essa canção
canção de amor no fim
canção de amor sem fim
se você pudesse ver nosso futuro
você mais eu
estourando bolhas de sabão
vivendo para ser amada
encontraria paz
encontraria amor demais.

Vê se para de me provocar
jogando esses sinais trocados
você não entendeu que eu estou apaixonado.

E eu não sei o que fazer mais
pra você gostar de mim.
E eu não sei o que fazer
da minha vida sem você.

Uma chance em um milhão
para acertar na sena do seu coração
muita areia pro meu caminhão
estourando bolhas de sabão
meu caminhão
bolhas de sabão.
Soap Bubbles

Before you show up
I was so lonely
I'm still so lonely
by the time I write this song
song of love at the end
song of endless love
if you could see our future
you and me
popping soap bubbles
living to be loved
would find peace
would find too much love.

Please stop teasing me
throwing these exchanged signals
you don't understand that I'm in love.

And I don't know what else to do
for you to love me.
And I don't know what to do
of my life without you.

One chance in a million
to hit the jackpot of your heart
lots of sand for my truck
popping soap bubbles
my truck
soap bubbles.
 
                         


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Re: Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
Reply #1 on: October 08, 2020, 17:35:38
hi @aureliobiz , catchy, sounds good to me  :dance: :dance: :dance: :dance:

great to hear you on the Kitchen!!!
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Re: Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
Reply #2 on: October 09, 2020, 06:30:23
There is some really cool synths in there I am really digging.   Nice groove as well!   


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Re: Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
Reply #3 on: October 09, 2020, 08:59:06
Welcome!
I listened carefully and i liked what I heard.

My ideas?
I would like it if you'd post the words. My knowledge of Portugese is sketchy at best.
And, personally, the drums are bringing a lot of unrest (for want aof a better word) into the song. Demanding constant attention. If this is really what you had in mind, please leave it as it is.

Your first entry in the Kitchen and a verynice start @aureliobiz
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Re: Bolhas de Sabao (Soap Bubbles)
Reply #4 on: October 09, 2020, 12:30:23
Hola @aureliobiz

Me ha encantado tu canción, it sounds fresh, sweet and invites to dance, a very nice color covering it!
Very easy to listen to!!
Mora
I did not know that to live I had to die so many times
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