• Bottle Top Song
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Bottle Top Song
on: May 18, 2019, 01:42:47
Hello everybody sorry I have not been here for the last 4 years but I've had children and lots of work to do thought I just call by and say hi wrote a song tonight, it's a bit ropey, I'm not gonna lie, just felt like giving it a try again. I hope you like it x




Bottle Top Song
By John B

Where are all the birds?
Where are all the bees?
Dawn is quiet now
What happened to the trees?

Paradise isle
But mile after mile
Of sand is littered now
It's been there for a while

They went to the deep
Down to the abyss
To find something clean
Instead they found this

Bottle Top
And a bag from a faraway shop
Bottle Top
And a bag from a faraway shop
Bottle Top
And a bag from a faraway shop
Bottle Top
And a bag from a faraway shop

Where are all the birds?
Where are all the bees?
Dawn is quiet now
What happened to the trees?








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Re: Bottle Top Song
Reply #1 on: May 18, 2019, 10:06:12
Hi @habiTat  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: good to see you back on the forum  :pompom: :pompom: :pompom: :pompom: :pompom:

great lyrics  :yes: :yes: :yes:

i will check out the song later today
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Re: Bottle Top Song
Reply #2 on: May 18, 2019, 10:46:26
Very nicely done. I saw those pictures from the bottom of the Mariana Trench.....you have captured the emotion that I felt upon seeing that bag hanging just off the bottom of such a pristine place just perfectly.

Wonderful and sincere performance. I hope it inspires you to write more.....I'll be listening.
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Re: Bottle Top Song
Reply #3 on: May 18, 2019, 16:00:03
ha Habs ...@habiTat....very nice song and video  ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb:: ::thumb::

you still got it  :thumbsup: :thumbsup:


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Re: Bottle Top Song
Reply #4 on: May 19, 2019, 19:23:43
« Last Edit: May 20, 2019, 14:11:13 by LePlongeur »
Having had children eh....?
That’s what happened to me and I looked the same!
Enough of this complaining.

I admire your stamina to have children and go at it again with your guitar.
Like the song too.
Don’t keep me waiting another 4 years, please?
Kind regards, Gus


Re: Bottle Top Song
Reply #5 on: May 20, 2019, 02:54:48
very enjoyable that @habiTat - kids are so conscious of  what`s happening to  our  old world.I hope yours like the way you made your  message singable ::thumb::



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