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Re: Burn
Reply #15 on: November 08, 2020, 08:48:49
good, gooood!


Ah, good, glad you liked it @cheff daniel   ;D :D


Re: Burn
Reply #16 on: November 09, 2020, 09:30:19
@oorlab I see now! Your explain does much sense,  playing  means  performing and directing as well.
I'm glad you like it @Dutchbeat @CGHound  @Marcus Nalgaber thank you for feedback it.

@Dutchbeat I'll try to add some crash cymbals as you advice me once i will go on with this.
I guess probably i have to cut it back to the basic track of piano and bass is playing the  two chords if i want join with this the newest
kitchen challenge
, thank you for setting this up! Hopefully some more kitcheners will do us the favor and join for fun reason too. :)
I choosed dm and C, if somebody wonders which both they are.

It doesn't need much if anything at all.  Maybe  duplicate the vocal track and keep one center and two left and right and play around with that. The singing perfect. Very moody.

I'm following you on Soundcloud and I gave the song a like.
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Re: Burn
Reply #17 on: November 11, 2020, 01:08:08
Well done. I didn't think the guitar was real, but you are very good at making it sound real, and more, at mimicking the effect of traditional instruments in different ways.

I could still add a bass if you want to ;)
Pleudoniem: composer; bass guitarist; guitarist; singer; drummer; tap-guitarist - o, and yes... erm- a bit of keys. Open for collabs.
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Re: Burn
Reply #18 on: November 11, 2020, 12:04:11
Thank you very much @Pleudoniem , its always a honor to me to get a review of you. As I take your  words really serious i thought  a bit about the mimicry point.... well, thats interesting compare but rather i see it not as mimicry as I don't try to pretend bigger or dangerous to bluff my enemies.... it's more i'm feel as a little grey bird learned to us a thin stick to pull the tasty worms out of the wood because it has no long suitable beak from birth.  ::)

Your additions always highly apreciated! In this cas i rather already added a bass line but maybe it got to quiet while the  accompayining track evolves. I appriciate any kinds of collabs this way otr the other way around.
If i will continue work at this, maybe for the new challenge... i'll certainly will consider your help! again :) ::heart::


Re: Burn
Reply #19 on: November 11, 2020, 13:23:20
Mimicking the effect isn't necessarily mimicry. You can play a cello as if it were a bass guitar, making it function as such, but that doesn't make it a bass guitar  ;)


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Re: Burn
Reply #20 on: November 11, 2020, 13:33:04
, but that doesn't make it a bass guitar  ;)

Yes!
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So much to learn in da kitchen  ::headphone::


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Re: Burn
Reply #21 on: November 14, 2020, 06:07:36
That was very cool.   ::thumb::

Are you a contralto or is that an effect?  I love the contralto sound, its so rich and harmonic and enjoyable.

If there is one thing I could suggest is that I would like a bit more vocal variance to let the instrumental build shine through a bit more.  At present, it covers it up a bit.  I didnt always know where I was in the song as I listened.  But, if that was purposeful as to make it a more ambient piece, then that worked quite well.




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